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Ocean's Nocturne of the COC...
2008-07-20
ch 5,
abuseNice job!

~emyx
Hottie12345k
2008-07-17
ch 5,
abuseHoly cow...Rifles just can't spin themselves. These girls are messed up.
I loved it! Keep them rolling in!
a harmonic life
2008-07-16
ch 1,
abuseI like this story, keep up the good work.
Oh, and as a guard girl, I have to say that the guard practice was well-written.
As a captain, I have to do that sort of thing that happened with the flags all the time. They never learn!
dutchesscourtney
2008-07-15
ch 5,
abuseI love love love this one, "Jude told me not to suck." Great job!

Have fun in DC. :)

~Courtney
Elaine Kaelar
2008-07-15
ch 5,
abuseAww, why you leaving? *tear* I love this story.

I'm dreading the impending doom of me learning guard work. o.O I'll be able to respect it, mos def, but love it, well...give me drums, and I'm happy.
Sweetest Melody
2008-07-05
ch 4,
abuseObviously the trading places think has been done countless times, so I have to give you props at making this interesting. I really like this story so far. And slightly afriad for what's going to happen to your poor characters (Can a swap ever end well, at least when (or if) it all comes out?) A little confusing at parts (the whole Jude and Madeline relationship is a little complicated.. but I'm sure it's just because there haven't been many chapters). But I definely like it so far.

I had a much better review written earlier, but as I sent it, my internet cut out so this one will have to do. *sighs* I can't wait for more.
Hottie12345k
2008-07-04
ch 4,
abuseThis is getting tense...madeline is very interesting. can't wait for maggie's first day!
dutchesscourtney
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseThis chapter may be your best yet. Sorry I'm just now reviewing, my 'alert' thing was broken for a few days...

Madeline is a very cool character and there is so much potential here for later chapters, I can't wait to see how it all plays out. The whole interaction with the Line seemed very realistic. :)

Keep going!

~Courtney
Ocean's Nocturne of the COC...
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseMaggie reminds me of my friend Fred. (Code name from Harry Potter). If she had to try being in pit, in my place, for even one day, I could definately see her trying to hook 'me' up with someone. Even if all the boys in pit (an drumline!) are idiots. ;)
A few grammer errors, but amazing! Love the plot progression: keep it coming!

~emyx
hazeleyedhottie
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseomg amazing! please update soon! :)
Arrastra
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseNice. i like it. :D
keep it up
...drumline! woot woot!
Elaine Kaelar
2008-06-28
ch 4,
abuseWhe! I like this, a lot. =) Is there going to be more where we get to know Will a little better? I know it's hard when you're in 1st person, and it's the beginning of the story, but it's nice to know as a reader whether we think his is worth the girls putting time and effort into. =)
projectfreq91
2008-06-28
ch 4,
abusenice chapter...yay drumline! kinda sounds like ours last year haha...still quite good
Maggie
2008-06-16
ch 1, anon.
abusehow come noone else ever seems to get the whole Margaret/ Maggie thing! My real name is Margaret and I hate it and I hate it when people call me that. People still find it hilarious to call me Margaret when we have a substitute teacher who doesn't know about the whole name issue. I know all about the whole name thing. Too much!!
Elaine Kaelar
2008-06-14
ch 3,
abuseI like it. =) It's almost convinced me to just try the guard thing... though I would miss my drummers far too much to make the switch permanently. Even though my sister and I aren't twins, this still sounds exactly like us... she's into dance and foo foo things (not that guard is foo-foo, I know that much) and going to be in guard as soon as she hits high school and I'm a drummer. *sigh*

Keep it coming! =)
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