Reviews for Ustio's Final Overture

Red Crown 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseI kind of wish you would be more descriptive about the characters. You seem to just describe their hair, or their hair and eyes, then move on. I am curious about their personalities, hobbies, distastes, and other things. I think I am guilty of this in my own writing as well. Other than that, I must say that you have an excellent interest grabber for your first chapter.
poka 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseYou've got me intrested