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| Sweetcheeksncis 2008-04-29 ch 3,  | abuseWow, great ending.. Sad Gibbs died. Well written and in character. |
| Well 2008-04-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseEverything was really good up until the last chapter, it felt rushed and really OOC. This had the potential to be an amazing story, with deep character thought and development, but in the end it just felt rushed, forced even. |
| hhsprincess 2008-04-28 ch 3, | abusei relly like it |
| M E Wofford 2008-04-28 ch 3, | abuseInteresting story! |
| Kaya 2008-04-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is really, really OOC. I mean, the idea could have worked, but the way you portrayed it felt way too rushed for it to be anywhere near to plausible. I personally feel that you didn't handle the issues of that you raised with much finesse or adequete understanding, either. And writing "later:" to get to a point later on is a cheap cop-out way of getting there. |
| Hope06 2008-04-27 ch 3, | abuseaww Tara is adorable glad to see that Abby and MCGee broke the rule though I am sad to see gibbs dead amazing story |
| Balou 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseGood! The title is't very catchy, but the story is very good. |
| Sweetcheeksncis 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuseGreat surprise bringing Kate back! Great chapter! Lookin forward to next chapt! |
| Lady aracne 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abusepoor Timmy, he is so scared! |
| Lady aracne 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseoh dear, Tim cutting himself, scary! great job hun! |
| Hope06 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuseTony you are definently not helping things poor Probie but i can see Kate coming to him when he needs someone the most and of course Gibbs isn't going to be mad it was self defence amazing work |
| hhsprincess 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuselove the story |
| M E Wofford 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abusePoor Tim. One little quibble: The very last sentence Tony says. Is he in the room with McGee now? It seemed that he and Ziva were watching behind the 2-way mirror. Sorry, it just threw me out of the story for a second. |
| Loopy4Tibbs 2008-04-23 ch 2, | abusewell written chapter. I can so visualise the elevator scene. |
| Sweetcheeksncis 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuse8-0 Whoa. That was intense! Poor Mcgee! Glad Abby is getting Mcgee help! Great chapt! Well written and in character. Looking forward to next chapt! |