 petite-dreamer 2008-09-23 . chapter 25Oh wow. You made Ash a player, then showed him the error of his ways. You brought Eggman back with robots with personalities. You made Ash go super against them. And then you wrapped it all up with grandbabies! HOW DO YOU FIND TIME FOR THIS AMAZINGNESS? I want to know what happens to lil' Ayame. Is Shadow's nightmare really a premonition? Heh - she's an aunt, isn't she? I can see it five years later - "Hey Auntie Ayame!" "I TOLD you not to call me that!" LOL |
 A Heart of Blades 2008-06-06 . chapter 25That was great! And it all wrapped up nicly as well. But Sonic and Rift...dang, that's got to be real tuff for them. Anyway, phantastic story! Phantastic series at that! |
 Sam Brody or Moon Princess 2008-05-19 . chapter 25 Aw, it's over. :( Yea! Maria has kids! Finally! :D |
 Shmeeko 2008-05-19 . chapter 25Ecellent Ending, I liked it alot ^-^ There were a few rather confusing parts in the past two chapters, but they were nothing significant. Good job! :D |
 Insanity Lord 2008-05-18 . chapter 25...Bittersweet ending really, but a good ending nonetheless :-).
I thoroughly enjoyed this fic and I'm kind of sad to see it end...
But how...I mean...did Eggman die there? Did he really just give up? Hmm... Oh well.
And Shadow's a grandpa! Sweet! :-D
- Insanity Lord. |
 Sam Brody or Moon Princess 2008-05-15 . chapter 23Awesome chapter! Wasn't Maria pregnant? When's that gonna happen, hmm? |
 Sam Brody or Moon Princess 2008-05-13 . chapter 22It's getting so good! Yea! :) Eggman really outdid himself this time, didn't he? |
 Tails360 2008-05-12 . chapter 21Amazing story, absolutely not boring. I love this story and hope to see a review soon. |
 Heart of Blades 2008-05-09 . chapter 21 Great chapter! So Eggman has upgraded his robot making skills...this could be bad. Oh, I really like the changes E-91 too |
 Sam Brody or Moon Princess 2008-05-08 . chapter 21So is there going to be another child in the works? ;) Great past couple of chapters! I cannot wait until the next one! |
 Insanity Lord 2008-05-07 . chapter 21Eggman again, huh? XD He just doesn't know when to quit!
Those robots are cool though :-D
- Insanity Lord. |
 Heart of Blades 2008-05-06 . chapter 20 Shadow said 'mind-blowing sex'!! *giggles like a fangirl*
*clears throat* . . . sorry. Anyway, wounderfull chapter, very cute and well writen. I'm glad Tracey and Ash finally talked a bit. And now Eggman, hmm, this should be epic! |
 Insanity Lord 2008-05-06 . chapter 20Finally! Ash gets his act together! And now he and Tracey get to play hero! XD
I loved this chapter. Maple is...um...'nice'...
- Insanity Lord. |
 Sam Brody or Moon Princess 2008-05-05 . chapter 19uh-oh! Shadow doesn't seem pleased. |
 Heart of Blades 2008-05-05 . chapter 19 Wasn't wearing his limiter!? *sigh* Idiot...well, I guess his had a lot of his mind or whatever...anyway, great chapeter! I'm assumeing this orange hedgehog is a different one, lol |