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| Angela, Pirate Ryoko 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely. The line: "And I loved him, in a way that I’m not even sure what it was" is a perfect way to sum it up. I love that Yoshida never explicitly told us what kind of love they had; she just made it clear that it was love and it was deep. I like that you didn't mess with that, as fanficcers (myself being the most guilty of it) tend to. I'm happy to see some new fiction here, and I'm off to read the next one. Keep up the good work! |