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| Whispering Ranger 2008-08-02 ch 19,  | abuseThat's great, and sweet, and funny ^^ I love it :D |
| Whispering Ranger 2008-07-28 ch 18, | abuseAww, that's sweet ^^ *grins* Pizza-lady tried to flirt with Billy xD I loved the ending, that one was really sweet :) Makes me wish there was more ^^ |
| Whispering Ranger 2008-07-26 ch 17, | abuse*stares* Cliffies... why do everyone have these cliffies?! That was great, really great :) Poor Billy though :0 And, damn, that was intense! Oo As soon as I update you will write five pages? :0 Are you implying something? Love Liz |
| Whispering Ranger 2008-07-01 ch 12, | abuseBut.. you wrote she was in a coma in an earlier chapter *pouts* I really like this one though :) *smacks Jason in the back of his head* Stupid. But good he got his mind back in place. Sam was a little too fast to forgive him for my liking, but hey, that's just me. I really liked the Tommy/Billy part of the chappie ^^ So sweet :) *sighs happily* |
| KevinBoy 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseINTERESTING. YOU'RE IMPROVING FROM YOUR OTHER STORIES BUT YOU SHOULD MAYBE LOOK INTO GETTING A BETA READER TO HELP YOU. ALSO IF YOU WRITE THE CHAPTER WITH DESCRIPTION IN THE RIGHT PLACES YOU SHOULDN'T NEED TO PUT YOUR THOUGHTS AND COMMENTS THROUGH IT BECAUSE IT BECOMES DISTRACTING AND TAKES AWAY FROM THE STORY. GOOD LUCK. |
| Whispering Ranger 2008-06-26 ch 11, | abuseI like the two last ones ^^ They're nice :D But... didn't she wake up a bit to fast? But, if it's essential to the fic, I won't say anything ;p |
| Whispering Ranger 2008-06-26 ch 9, | abuseThose chapters were nice :) And you're right, the conversation between Sam and Kim really reminded of ours. I really liked this chapter. The others were great, but this was the best ^^ I'm still waiting to read chappie 10, but it's not showing yet. But it was really great Hann, I really enjoyed them ^^ |
| Whispering Ranger 2008-06-17 ch 6, | abuseI like this chapter! Woohoo, Jason going terminator on Rocky! xD Nah, just kidding. But I really liked it though ^^ It was great :) By the way, do you know what's happened to PRU? |
| Dragonfire411 2008-06-16 ch 5, | abuseNice story. I'm working on a story as well. Check it out when you have time. |
| Whispering Ranger 2008-05-27 ch 5, | abuse*chuckles* I'm not sure about what to say right now ^^ I'm simply amused, and.. surprised.. and lots of stuff like that. But I liked it :) Your writing skill is improving ^^ Not that it wasn't good from before, 'cause it was, but you know what I mean :) |
| Whispering Ranger 2008-05-27 ch 4, | abuseOoh, me likey ;) This pairing is a new experience to me, but Tommy and Billy kind of.. Fits. They're so different, and that's what makes it all so much better ^^ Uhm.. Chapter two and three where pretty much the same, I noticed. But that doesn't bother me ;p You should definately write more TommyBilly :D |
| Lunar Silver Wolf 2008-05-03 ch 4, | abuseyou getting better at writing stories. i hope you write more Tommy/Billy very soon. hope you update soon |
| Lunar Silver Wolf 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseyour getting better writing fanfiction i'm happy for you but you need to read over this because there a spelling mistake in there. i hope there another chapter soon |