 StarGage 2009-08-19 . chapter 4Oh, I love this stoy so much! I'm so glad my friend told me about this, and i mean REALLY REALLY glad. |
 Spicy Lime 63 2009-04-18 . chapter 4good plot. i like it so far. though i gotta say that i found it strange that Osieau was more concerned with the fact that his friend was gay than actually being Edward Elric--an Amestrian. it's still pretty good though. update soon. |
 Uniasus 2009-02-18 . chapter 4Poor Edo! At least Mesquin has the ability to help out. I'm assuming he will tell on of the guards who 'Flamel' is. Right? Please update! |
 darkgreenprietess 2008-10-07 . chapter 4Poor Ed. This story is awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 Tragic Songbird of Eddis 2008-06-12 . chapter 4Oh my gosh, no! What's wrong with Ed?!
Heh, sorry 'bout that... I'm a Fullmetal Alchemist fan. Well, I really like your story so far! I didn't know that Oiseau knew that Nicholas was Ed... but anyways, that was a pretty scary thing to imagine, bleeding eyes.
I love your story! Update soon, please? |
 QuitexSoul 2008-06-12 . chapter 4awsome!
i actually found this story from a link ChibiEdo gave in one of her pics.
i wish she would hurry up and post the. . .comic thingy . . .
I kno wats its called but i cant freakin spell it!! lol
I WANT TO READ IT SO BAD AND HER PICS R SO GOOD!
anyways FANTASTIC JOB! really well done!
have fun in England!
XD |
 FHT 2008-06-11 . chapter 4"Dood, liek ... Ed's eyes OMFG!1!!1!1!11!11!1!11"
... xDD
Mm so. Interesting chappie ... a little on the short side, but, like I said: I like 'em short, and blond, and temperamental. ;)
Send. Me. POCKY.
- I ran out -
xD
Au resevoir. xP |
 itachifangirl8 2008-06-11 . chapter 4 I thought Ed died. I guess not. He's invincible? Update soon!
I want pocky... |
 ElricTaisa 2008-06-11 . chapter 4as always I really love this ^^ I like it that you made roy cleanse the water (you know I like such little details..) you know already that I love oiseau and that scene XDD I noticed you changed the 'if edward liked roy' to 'if edward liked roy mustang' ^^ that's good XD
poor ed, no one knows it's him.. ironically oiseau does know but none of the amestrians XDD
I should really draw a new version of that christmas pic.. I don't really like it that much anymore..XD
hm hadn't you said you needed tina for this chapter..?
well as always UPDATE SOON*_* |
 hittocerebattosai 2008-06-11 . chapter 4fun, fun, fun~ ^^ Love it! *pets Oiseau and Ed* Thank you for the update~ ^^ Have fun in England! |
 mrawgirl09 2008-06-11 . chapter 4GAH! WHAT HATH HAPPENED TO ED"S EYES?!?!?! THIS IS GONNA BE SWEET IF DRAWN! GYAH! half-closed eyes with blood seeping out.. ah! ART! |
 Fullmetal Embers 2008-06-10 . chapter 4AH!! Evil cliffhanger! Damn you! Update soon! |
 Nekoblue7 2008-05-25 . chapter 3Hum... Ed's disguised is quite interesting and his suffering with the separation is so painful that I almost cried.
I just didn't get the last part, but nicely done though! :) |
 mrawgirl09 2008-05-22 . chapter 3wow... who would have thought ... just. WOW, anyways, i'd really like to know what happens next!! i hope you write soon! PS is Ed's disguise REALLY THAT GOOD? i mean, the people in his command dosn't recognise him, and i'm really curious if Roy's gonna recognise him!! what if he doesn't? dun Dun DUN hello, prison! or maybe even execution!! without even being able to tell them they got the wrong soldier! OMG...then everyone in Edward's behalf will be SO guilt ridden, ESPECIALLY ROY AND TAYLOR, but not the ppl who didn't get Ed the letter of plan! or at least that's what i'm thinking... |
 hittocerebattosai 2008-05-21 . chapter 3Ii~~ *dance* Tis fun. ^^ |