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| teeny xoxohh 2008-06-08 ch 6,  | abusei really like this chapter...i feel so bad 4 rose though! i hope max doesnt do anythimhg to hurt 'chelle or her mother! ~Christine (xoxoxteeny) |
| Bookish0278 2008-06-06 ch 6, | abuseI thought this chapter was very cool and how Michelle met everybody, all of them older, and less drug-adled, but still there. Where's Jojo? I liked max's comment about the new artists,and Jude's reaction, becasue I always would wonder about what would happen when- have you ever seen Rent, the musical? Anywho, well all these bohemian kids moved in with new styles. You adressed that, which i though was cool. I loved it, and I like she is the spitting image of her mother, that was a nice touch. i loved it overall, update soon! |
| toujoursFrance 2008-05-15 ch 5, | abuseAww, I liked it :) I can't wait to see what Lucy does! And will Jude be with her? |
| Bookish0278 2008-05-14 ch 5, | abuseI can't wit to se what happens in the Village. 'Caue what happens in the village, stays in the Village. :) I like this story. Lucy always seems like a ** (sorry if that offends you) in future fics, But I guess that always captures how everybnody else has moved on, except Max. Rant over. I lurv this fic and hope u continue soon! |
| toujoursFrance 2008-04-30 ch 4, | abuseThe quick updates are fantastic! I hope Max comes back soon :) |
| teeny xoxohh 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseomg...its so sad...but so good ~Christine |
| Bookish0278 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseVery angsty, but still vyer good. Do know what would make ME less angsty? An update soon! I like this story and I going to follow it for as long as you go. |
| toujoursFrance 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseI love how Max and Michelle are so much alike! Update soon :) |
| teeny xoxohh 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abusewow, its really interesting..update soon! :D ~Christine |
| Bookish0278 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abuseI wasn't ging to look at this fanfoic, but once I started to read, I beca,me hooked and now I am annoyed. Why? Because... it is a GOOD story and I will follow it if another chapter (or more, please!) is added! So, please, UPDATE SOON! Bookish0278 |
| spectacularspectacular 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abusepahaa what the hell did he do to get locked up in jail?!! lol |
| toujoursFrance 2008-04-25 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter! I'm interested to see exactly what Max needs bail for though... Oh, and thanks for the cookies :D P.S. I just have one critique; the ending seemed a little abrupt. Maybe you could flesh out (or flush out, I never know which one it is) the diner scene a little? Just for future reference :) |
| toujoursFrance 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseLooks interesting :) Update as soon as you can! |