 slyswn28 2009-12-28 . chapter 8What I enjoyed about this little tale was Madara for lack of a better word (although really it is quite a perfect word for this) was just so HUMAN. It was a refreshing thing to see/read, I haven't come across like this (or even close to this) in quite some time. The way a villain mind works, sometimes far more intriguing than that of a hero, sighs...now with this in mind I'm plan to check out some of your other works. |
 Itanaru101 2009-06-07 . chapter 8MAN DIS IS SO BLOODY BRILLIANT! |
 redfoxmoon 2008-09-06 . chapter 8Ah. The happy version. I really liked this. It was an interesting different perspective. Hopefully the manga will have it's own happy version(preferablly with both Sasuke and Naruto alive, and though I doubt they would be together, at least I hope they won't be with anyone else so I can hope). |
 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2008-06-07 . chapter 8T_T Aw!! So sad!! I think this was the best chapter yet, and well worth the wait. I'm sad it's over, but it was very good and I enjoyed the read. |
 Nisroc 2008-05-27 . chapter 7nnoes. :(, poor madara, i love him more than ever. I hope he doesn't end up dying for ever or i hope he doesn't suffer more. He is so amazing and my god, you are so good at this. I can't believe he actually gave him his eyes, they were his prize possesions for they were from his brother. You must update soon because this sotry is just getting better. And this story is one of the best so far. Keep goin :) |
 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2008-05-26 . chapter 7T_T So sad! Madara can't die, he's too cool!! Update soon, please!! |
 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2008-05-24 . chapter 6Oh, from coffee to wine, now: the lesser or greater of two evils? ^_^ Update soon, por favor! |
 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2008-05-19 . chapter 5^_^ Sasuke is just not having a good time of it all, huh? Itachi, and the clan, and Madara, and Danzou, and...@_@ yeah. Update soon, please? |
 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2008-05-14 . chapter 4Aw...T_T So sad! The mysteries in this keep it quite interesting. And the continued coffee...sounds like me in a morning. >.< Update soon!! ^_^ |
 Nisroc 2008-05-14 . chapter 3i love madara in this story,lol,and sasuke is starting to listen to him more. HM i wonder if sasuke will join forces with sasuke. And if he does, will there be a fight against konoha o.0,lol |
 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2008-05-12 . chapter 3Aw! ^_^ For once, Itachi cares! Very unique, and has me wanting more. Although, a bit more interaction would be nice. it's mainly dialogue, and some meat on the bones weould be a nice touch. Great plot though; I hope you update soon! |
 BrokenAvenger21 2008-05-07 . chapter 2Wow, very interesting. You might have to make it an AU as teh manga chapters are updated, but still, very good. Maybe do one from Sasuke's POV eventually though. WIll sasuke gain the EMS in your fic? Just curious. KEEP IT UP!
TDF |
 ThisAccountHasBeenMoved 2008-05-06 . chapter 2Woo! yay, another good story! Please update soon, I love your stories! |
 Nisroc 2008-05-06 . chapter 2man, i love this story, you must continue, i ilove how you made madara's personality, he is so cool, please continue |
 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2008-05-06 . chapter 2Interesting little bit at the end, about Madara having trouble directly lying. I like the coffee struggle throughout the entire thing-adds an amusing, comical air. ^_^ Update soon-this is developing nicely. |