Reviews for Bloodline Destroyer

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Gladron 2008-07-26 ch 25,	abuseOk, i been readin this story for a while now, and i was planning on reviewing at shpater 20, cus i didnt realise that there was more to it. Anyway i just want to start off by saying... THIS STORY IS SPIGGIN AWESOME! i love this story. You see naruto is my favourite anime and you have used the story so extremely well. Also you have included my other 2 favourite anime's, Bleach and One Piece. I love it how you've given naruto the use of the world governments techniques, thats spiggin awesome. i also love how you've mixed some of the naruto characters with the one piece and bleach characters, like mixing shino with franky, thats a pretty darn funny mix. And Zabuza with Ichigo's dad, whom i dont know the name of. I also liked how u put some shinigami moves into naruto's arsenal. Like the zanpakutou (sword) release(?) (probably not the right word to use as that actually applies to the hollow shinigami, which i have also forgotten the name of). And u used the hollow mask (and tails), nice. I LOLed when u made haku a girl, considering haku is a guy in the real thing. I find that hilarious. I also laughed at the fact that naruto has 2 girlfriends, who sleep in the same bed as him, and hav u no what with him, lucky bugger. I LOLed again when zabuza was shopping and one of things he was asked to get was fertility pills, HAKU AND/OR KIN WANNA GET PREGNANT! LOL! Also good work on the jutsus, actually coming up with the jutsus, and then finding the japanese name for them, that was/is awesome. Now that Im done with the praise, I would like to point out a few flaws, one semi-major flaw, is the grammar. A lot of it is real bad, like using that instead of then, or missing words, i mean sure, a lot of it is probably just simple mistakes, but there are a fair few of em, and it kinda ruins the flow of the story, kinda. Another thing, i think u may have made naruto too strong, i mean sure make him strong, but s-class? and before the age of a regular genin, i think thats a bit too much. Also another flaw, noted because i just read the chapter that it was involved in. How can sasuke come up behind naruto undetected when even anko couldn't. That was a bit strange i think. But yea, other than those few flaws, and probably more that i cant think of atm, this is a spiggin awesome story. More praise, i really loved how you twisted the story to still contain the characters and follow the majority of the original story. And well done on getting so many chapters done in so little time, i mean 31 chapters in 3 months, thats spiggin awesome, some stories take months per chapter, AND they are short chapters, some of yours are short(ish) but most are very long, and i appreciate it greatly. Btw i wrote this review at the end of chapter 25, so if anything has been fixed up in the chapters that come after 25 then im sorry for pointing it out again. Once again great story :-)
Serenity Maxwell 2008-07-21 ch 32,	abusenice short, but the main story rocked! nice work.
TheOtaku Akatsuki 2008-07-21 ch 32,	abusewow u luv that jackie chan movie too! tat part was funny! ad another thing, i dont pity kiba he deserves it
Pub-blue92 2008-07-21 ch 31,	abuseNice short story's hope you get over your writers block soon. Until then Peace
Dracomancer1 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abuseWow. I'm surprised you took my suggestion. I was also LOLing at the rush hour reference, that and kiba's plans for a bachelor party.
GuyverZero 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abusegreat chapter looking foward to more.
Knives91 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abuseBoomy! Lots of boomy! More boomy is needed! Quick!
Alucard180 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abusegood battles, and really funny moment (Musama peeing on the vines was a great) and hinata's sing wasn't bad ether looking forward to more
The Silver Blossom 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abuseCOOL!! I really like it!! Keep updating! Perfect song for Hinata.
griffin blackwood 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abuseawesome
Dustin B. AKA DusandDan 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abuseHey look im Deidara! takes bags full of hand grenades and starts throwing a grenade at a time at buildings and things WHE ART IS A BLAST!
roxxihearts 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abusethe part with hinata tugged on my heart strings
bluewolf963 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abuseWow, even Danzo is in on everything. And they want to unlock the Zyuubi? That's a scary thought. I'll be glad when Naruto gets a chance to tear them all apart. Looks like Sasuke decided it was time to capitalize on his attempted friendship with Sakura. I'm curious to see what abilities your new members of Akatsuki will have. Coming in during a wedding... that's just rude. And I liked the humor with the statue. The small story at the end was a nice touch. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Kingkakashi 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abuseA good chapter, with some intense fight scenes. So Sasuke is back in action. I can't wait for Naruto to kill him most painfully. Kiba obviously was the comic relief in this chapter. The bit at the end with Hinata was sad, she seems to have regressed since Naruto left. Will he be the one to lift her back up? Keep up the great work.
roboguy45 2008-07-20 ch 32,	abuseilove this story starts to cry at its greatness u are the king of all authors i bow to ur greatness my master

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