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*ignoring the fact that i read marquis de sade*

ahem...um i actually really enjoyed this story!

The discriptions and details were just top notch.

Loved this. You really kept the teo in character, especially when you emphasized Namine's innoncence and Larxene's cruel nature.

And I've actually read Justine; not for the squeamish is all I'm saying.

Honestly, for as many of your stories as I've read, I should review more. I'm a bad reader; forgive me. D:

I really enjoy your portrayal of Naminé and Larxene, the latter in particular. Naminé's innocence is reflected very well. The way you describe things through her point of view (like Larxene being the pitch black night and Marluxia being the "hint of sun") are great and really give me a feel for her child-like demeanor.

Larxene was defeated too early in KH:CoM for me to have gotten a really firm grasp of her character, so I'm open to different interpretations of how she acts. Your characterization is great, especially since you don't back down from it. I see too many people who try and make her twisted, but then give her this really soft side. That doesn't work for me.

Where did you hear/read that Larxene canonically reads Marquis de Sade? :0

Are you going to be posting any long-length fics anytime soon, hm? -pokepoke-

o.o ::blink,blink:: are you for real¿ *poke,poke* that has to be the most beautiful thing i have ever read. seriously, i am at a loss for words to your poetically haunting fic. wow. just, wow.