Hi I just love this story and cant wait to see what happens next
Are you gonna write more chapters?
Are you or is your friend "Drottningu" from Iceland?

Omg this is an amazing fanfic!

I hope that you do update it sometime again!

I haven't found any mistakes except for one...UPDATE ALREADY! Although it is an AU and I actually like Eric's character from the show (not from this fanfic)I fell in love with this story, PLEASE UPDATE

I have to say this is a story VERY well written definetly one to remember.I have read a lot of these stories and this is definetely one of my favorites.

Well all I have 2 say is that I absoulutley ADORE your story. You..Not so much. Im a writter myself I understand the "writters block" concept real well, trust me I've been there. Without a doubt your story has got to be one of the best I have read in this what angers me is the fact of the matter is you are writting. I Know reviews encourage people but c'mon don't ask for them, its very annoying and unproffesional. You should write for the sake of writting and base your ranks on the number of views you get. The more you plead for reviews the less you will get. Please stop this childish game of begging for review and just write. Your story is amazing and you should be happy by the fact alone that people actually read this. Please stop making your "authors notes" and "replies to reviews" MUCH longer then your stories! It unbelievable! Your writting a story there for "A/n" are some what tolerable but stop with the "review replies" im sure im not the only one angered at you for making these 'replies' longer than your story. Its pathetic! stop calling for attention. Get over it. Be a little more focused and a heck of a lot mor proffesional.!

Take this as a criticizm, a review,a flame however you feel your outlook is. The fact is I feel like this is a note from the outlook of the reader. Stop the absurd uneccesary childsplay stupidity and get to work. I love this story please update :-)

and refrain from making the review replies longer than what we are here for "the actual story" and get more professional. Review replies should be handled more personally and on your own time not ours. Write a message or an email or something.

simply trying to spread the truth. Now PLEASE UPDATE!

Please finish this story!

I am very excited to find out what will happen next! And I'm sorry you're having so many problems, that really sucks. I hope your dog is ok! We have 2 dogs, and I can't imagine having to put either one down or have them taken away! That would be awful.

On a slightly more on-track note, your story has an interesting plot line, and it's nice to see a story that pairs Jackson and Melissa, and uses their personalities to an extent, but doesn't include the whole "plane crashed so we're stuck on a random island" thing (not that that was bad, but change is nice now and then). And you write in all the drama very nicely, although I feel so bad that she has such a terrible home life. But how else does the story have some substance? Ah, well.

I'm off to eat some chocolate cake! I hope your luck starts turning around soon, and that a little of it rubs off on me because you start posting new chapters again! Cheerio!

i am sorry for your familly problems. i am also sorry for all does people who nag you. i think that your story is perfect. and i loved it. you are a great writer. you have no reason to say sorry to those , and what does Va'Fa Napoli mean? )

This is my favorite AU flight 29 down fan fiction. It's very fun to read, please continue :D

i really luv this story. update soon.

this is an amazing story! please please continue because i really need to know what happens to melissa and i really want to see jackson tell her that he loves her!

great job

jelissalover

HA no way am i gonna abandon this story

i totally understand that you're going through a bad time (or were, don't know how it is now seeing as i havent read any more author notes)

but i hope you'll (or you do) feel better

:)

love the story so far

Jackson is so caring...

:) Just like in the show

Must suck though, starting to like your foster sibling?

I know their not really your sibling,

but it must be awkward.

:) I love it !

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

This story is amazing. An eensy little bit ooc, but the consistency of their personalities makes up for it. Fantastic job! Keep up the good work and UPDATE!

-MWTKL

So far I'm thinking it's really cool :)

why were you depressed, and it sucks that u were, but i like the ending!