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| CarineM 2008-05-16 ch 1,  | abuse"A path of colored squares has led him into the arms of his partner" Your idea for this fic is great. |
| DKM 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseCandy Land, orange soda, and Finding Nemo... Three things that I'll never see the same way again... (I don't think you wanna know, but if you do, I'll tell you later.) Wow... The way you managed to turn this into one hell of a sexy fic just blows my mind. You start out so simply and innocently that you don't see it coming until, BOOM! There ya go. And by then, you're so wrapped up in the story, you just can't stop reading. And then the smut takes over and, well, you get the picture. Another wonderful Friday afternoon spent reading great fan fiction!! Thank you! This has got to be the best way to spend a boring Friday afternoon slacking off at work! It's been the best for me, that's for sure!! Keep up the great work, and I can't wait for the next one! -DK |
| Mana6 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseOh yummy Candy Land goodness! Hot stuff mia! Good job! |
| zosohoorah 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abusewell done! I think i need to revisit my childhood games. SO borderline porn but hey i like it |
| BonesDBchippie 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abusemia~ BEEP-BA-BEEP-BEEP...We interrupt this fic for a short break so readers everywhere can run to thier kitchens for CHILLED damp face cloths and ICE COLD beverages...*GULPS beverage--wipes face* WHOLY sugar cubes woman!! THAT was PHENOMENAL!! I think you covered it all...FUN game, HOT smoochies, "the line", SMUTTALICIOUS smut, safe sex, and the OMFG! orgams (hmm, that could of been covered in the great smut but hey I'm one for pointing out details!! LOL!) OH yeah baby this one definitely is going in the B&B one-shots!! IT'S a schorcher! WHEW! Makes me wan'a dig out the "Candy Land" from the attic and intice hubby to a game! LOL!! Just LUV your M stuff! M! It's AWESOME!! ~G :D |
| Darynthe 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, you wrote very professionally, keeping it realist and original. THanks for such a great piece! |
| lilcatfish96 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOh Wow! Powerfully erotic! You've done it again, Mia! Great job! Hugs! |
| boneskittie 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseOh Mama Mia! That was some spicy game of Candyland! |
| standing-in-the-doorway 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseHot. And I love Candy Land. Definitely the best board game! |
| TaraFish 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abusewow... i suddenly want to play candyland... |
| McBonesBooth 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseHey, great job once again! I cant wait for more, and for you to continue on with "How my Heart behaves" *hint hint* Anyways, I loved it! |
| marteloise 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseIt was both in character and really sexy!! I love how you write! Great one-shot, hope you will write many more like this one! |
| Sassafrasford 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseI really hope you continue!! That was hot! |
| danireed 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abusethat was a grat little fic |
| cordy2007 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abusethat was wonderful...incredibly hot and yet so well in character. Hope you will spoil us with lots of those fluff-smut stuff in the future. And I'm really excited about your collaboration with SSJL. That has to be great! |