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| morningstar67 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. I didn't have any confussion until I read this though. What part did Niki play or was she made up for the movie? |
| Aims1978 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseIt's refershing to see that someone read the books, as well as watching the movies. I like how you've written Bourne's thoughts, using them to bridge several gaps in the movie version. Am looking forward to reading more of your stuff ^_^ |
| GreenCat3 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseYou wrote a bookverse fanfic. You're officially a personal hero of mine. Very well done! I really enjoyed your take on Bourne's thoughts. The only thing that annoyed me a bit were the one-sentence paragraphs - IMO, those should only be done for special emphasis. But I loved it anyway! :D |
| texamich 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseIt is really great to see a story inspired by Ludlum's novels. Your style is crisp and a true tribute to the master. Looking forward to more. |