OMG another fantastic story. The chapters about Sirius dieing again were heart wrench but so well done. I love how the relationships have grown in such a realistic way. You have done Severus, Harry, Remus and all the characters proud. Thanks for sharing your awesome talent.

OMG this is such an awesome story. Well done as always, but I have got to got to work in the morning, I ain't going to be worth a darn. But I couldn't stop reading. Thanks for sharing your awesome talent with us.

this was a great story.

Can't wait to read the next one. Seeing Snape as Harry's dad is very interesting.

This was a fantastic first chapter. The "flashback" scenes with Lily and Snape are my favorite but they are always a little sad.

I really like this one too... nice ending..

Holy crude! Wow, what a way to end Sirius' life, for him to save Severus! great story... I do feel for Harry though, poor boy, to lose Sirius again...

wow, Sirius is not normal, I know that he doesnt like Severus, but to pick her over Harry is just wrong... she is a bit scary as well...

I love this story. I also like how Harry and Sev stuck it to the Minister.. he is such a political toe rag... I hope that the world will be able to deal with the name change on a nicer level.. but I doubt it.

Poor Siri. He was trying so hard to be nice and he was doing good for a while...

I love him but Dumbledore anoys me! He just sits back and watches like one of those T.V. naturalists you know? Oh no the lion cub is dying and can't find it's mommy. It's realy sad, but we can't interfear with nature! Thats way worse then watching something Die! He could of totaly stepped in and helped Harry at the dinner. He has enuf wait but no.
needed to vent...

Their relationship has really flourished... well done!

I haven't even finished the chapter yet, but OMG:
"She’d laughed and assured him all princesses lived this way and in the privacy of his mind, Severus had vowed to himself to give Lily the same pleasant fate as her storybook heroines."
This line is just so heart wrenchingly romantic... aahh

ah... I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed the rest of your story after the first chapter. I had thought I had added it to my alerts but guess I didn't and didn't notice when you posted more until your were at chapter 22. Since school is finally out and I have the time to read your now completed story, I'll finally be getting around to reviewing every chapter. :)

Anyways, really liked this chapter but definitely need to go back and refresh my mind on all the details of your first story. Thought is was very sweet that Remus wanted Harry to be his best man and Severus to stand with him as well. Loved Severus' concern for Harry when he had his sinking moment and Harry's comment to his father mentioning he missed out on the first time Harry was disciplined, I was thinking the same time. Also Severus' last line was great. Guess Remus finally gave into peer pressure and asked Tonks to marry him... ;)

awesome