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| Starrylizard 2008-10-07 ch 9, | abuseHa! This was awesome fun, in a hurty/comfort sorta team-y way. Love the Keller-McKay interactions and the light-hearted ending. I'm really enjoying Keller in the show too! :) |
| Flamingo1 2008-08-31 ch 9, anon. | abuseI have all kinds of love for this fic, and all your other stories. ...bucket of pickles? Cheers! |
| Forksmoker03 2008-08-24 ch 9, | abuseI loved this story, it was awesome. I'd love to see it continued. Also, I was seriously impressed at your ability to keep the story going even after McKay and Keller reached the hovel. I've seen a lot of fic that kinda gets bogged down and you handled it superbly. Kim |
| heartfallen 2008-08-24 ch 9, | abuseAwesome story. It was a pleasure to read |
| Whirlwind421 2008-07-19 ch 9, | abuseI totally absolutely love it! It is awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome! Awesome!! Rodney and Jen are so cute! I really hope you write another fic! Because I loved this one! I love how last chapter, John mentioned that Jen looked like she was holding on to Rodney like he might float away! I loved the action and suspense and whumping!! And the fact that like didn't 'get together' in the end actually was nicer then most fics where the charactors go through an adventure and fall madly in love, kiss, etc, etc... Awesome story! Write more!! Because your writing's awesome!! |
| Darkwing333 2008-06-15 ch 9, | abuseOh ya! Best story i have read in a while. I loved this adventure with so many twists and turn. It was awsome! Had me glued to my computer. Keep up the great writting! |
| Smileylion 2008-06-01 ch 2, | abuseOh...Very cool! Love the friction between Lorne and Keller. Only on Chapter2, but love it already! :-) |
| EagleGirl6 2008-05-30 ch 9, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this. I like Keller too, and it was fun to have just her and Rodney for a while, then everyone. Hopefully we'll hear more about her and Ronon... And more Lorne too, please - I like him! Thanks so much for posting this :) Kelly |
| RedJewel2662 2008-05-12 ch 9, | abuseAwesome story! I loved it! |
| Tipper 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuseHiya! So, a couple of people have asked how Rodney "stunned" the marine, and that's my fault -- I should not have assumed everyone has seen the episode "Harmony". He used the stunner he carries in his backpack. I'll make it clear in the fic. Also, just fyi, the Helenan minister is not the ruler of his people. He is just a diplomat the Helenan's assigned to the Atlantian team. But even if he was, I'm really surprised people think it's OOC for Keller to stand up to someone when it comes to a medical issue. She wouldn't be an effective head of medicine if she wasn't capable of that strength. She may be shy about a lot of things, but she has never been shy about her work -- and being lied to about the state of the patients she is going to see and consequently not being fully prepared? No doctor is going to take that lightly. |
| Jinxauthor Mel 2008-05-08 ch 9, | abuseI love this story. At the beginning, I was wondering how exactly Rodney "stunned" that marine. At first I thought maybe with a stunner, then I remembered they don't carry those and anyway, you would surely have mentioned it seeing how huge and heavy those things are. So, did he simply *hit* him? I'd have really REALLY like detail on that one! *g* (Oh, and just what had the marine to say about it afterwards, anyway? Or Lorne as his superior? Or Sheppard, for that matter?) And, uh ... does Keller have the gene? I don't remember it being mentioned in canon, and then again you didn't write so explicitly either, but with her using a medical scanner, it's kind of inferred, isn't it? Or are those universal? I want to see that prank! (Yeah, I like Lorne, but he really has it coming. ^^) It was so wonderful how, even though that was a condition for her to be on *Rodney's* side (And how childish was that, huh? ^.~) AGAINST the others, all of a sudden all those *others* were on *her* side against Lorne! That's possibly the best written piece of team dynamic I've ever read. Thank you. |
| Isobel Kelte 2008-05-06 ch 9, | abuseThis was adorable. I really love Keller; it's so easy to identify with her. With the slight exception of her confidence towards the ruler at the beginning, you captured the essence of Keller here. I love the hints at Keller/McKay, too, hehe. |
| bailey1ak 2008-05-02 ch 9, | abuseI absolutely loved your story. I would love to see you write another adventure of this new team. Maybe a month or so in the future. Loved the interaction and they were so in character the entire time, especially Rodney. He was so great. |
| bailey1ak 2008-05-01 ch 2, | abuseSo far I am really enjoying this story. |
| Delta Two 2008-04-29 ch 9, | abuseGood story. I'm wondering, are you gonna have a follow-up for us, cause ya kinda left us hanging when Rodney stunned the marine. I know why he did it, but I think there has to be repercussions of some sort. I'm prior military, so I know that if that happened, it would be serious. I know you've got the whole not following orders thing, and all, but you get my meaning. Still fantastic story, and would love to see more. |