Reviews for The notso Big Daddy

Wolfinson 2008-08-21 ch 2,	abuseOh, update.
FISHY CRACKERS 2008-08-15 ch 2,	abuseI'm loving it so far, please just longer chapters. Try to make each chapter 10 words at minimum, thats what i used to do before moving up to 20. Just try to keep going unless you feel it should end at a certain dramatic spot.
dbkit 2008-06-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis story has my interest. please continue.
Cooper13 2008-05-05 ch 2,	abuseSeems like a good story, you've caught my interest. I would like to read more.
suicycojr95 2008-05-04 ch 2,	abusetoo short great story update soon
clilc 2008-05-02 ch 2,	abuseGreat Story Idea and nice work so far. I only suggest bigger chapters. See if you can at least double your work. A lot of people tend to skip little ones like this. (I know I do a lot of the times.) But don't let that discouraged you. I hardly ever write reviews. Only for the ones I really like to see continued above others. (I read too many too often to deal with the hassle lol.) I'm dieing to see what happens next.
SuperAnth 2008-05-01 ch 2, anon.	abuseExcellent take on the Big Daddy, de-programmed. Keep it going!
Harlequin de Rustre 2008-04-27 ch 1,	abuseNice idea... truly innovative. Not many actually go for this approach in detail. The other authors are all like: "How does the Big Daddy feel?" and "The Little Sister: what's she REALLY like?". You're actually looking at how the psychological functions of the Big Daddy would be like... I likey...
suicycojr95 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abusenice keep on goin