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| Chibi Cheesecake 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseAww, so cute! I love the "snapshot" feel to this. The juxtaposition of Gongaga and Midgar at the beginning works well, too. |
| 1wngdngl 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseTypical Zack, so excited to be back :D You know, I can't say whether I'd much like the whether in either Midgar or Gongaga - both would be way to warm for me. Hmm, if I had to pick a spot to live, it might be Junon...or Wutai, if there wasn't, you know, a war going on.. |
| Crystal Rose of Pollux 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseAww, this is adorable! I can just picture Zack's happiness at going home, and meeting his best friend! I loved his note to Seph! Yay for friendship fics! Great work! |
| NoBuddy 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeh. Nice one. |
| Kazaam 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked how you compared Gongaga with Midgar! And I really like the idea of Zack having a loft room and watching the stars.^^ And mentioning that you could see the glow of the mako reactors in Midgar was a neat touch! I don't think I'd thought of it that way before. **is amused at Zack's reports.** And aw, Zack glomping Seph was so cute!^^ And I love that Seph had been looking forward to it.^^ |
| 13thhourbells 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseHmm, how sweet! I don't know why, but the more I play Crisis Core, the more I love Zack and Sephiroth friendship. It makes it even sadder, what happened in Nibelheim, and God knows I love to make myself depressed |
| Ardwynna Morrigu 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseSo Zack, throwing himself at his reason for coming 'home'. ^^ |