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| angelvala87 2008-09-09 ch 3,  | abuseI loved reading the story. Interesting point when Rodney couldn't speak.. LOL Excellent! Lots of stars! |
| HlysComment 2008-09-03 ch 3, | abuse*applauds enthusiastically* Incredible story. I absolutely loved it! |
| HlysComment 2008-09-03 ch 1, | abuseSo far, so good. This story is really drawing me in. |
| Jinxauthor Mel 2008-05-08 ch 3, | abuseGood Lord, I think I might hurt for that loss as much as Rodney does. But I really really like your conclusion, especially the learning (for future eventualities) and John's statement about "potential" that Rodney didn't "entirely" understand. Because, yeah. Brain as big as a planet. I'll come to him. God, what a faith ... Great story. Thank you. |
| SaJi 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuse"You saw potential in those books. I see it someplace else." *points* My heart did a little flutter right there. That has got to be one of the sweetest things anyone could say to Rodney and of course he didn't get it. =3 |
| sablecain 2008-04-28 ch 3, anon. | abuse"you saw potential in those books. I see it someplace else." I LOVE THIS. You found a lovely way to emphasize just how far Sheppard will go to save his friends, family, team. Lovely. Your descriptions are terrific and I adore how you write John and Rodney! Yay! |
| Cutiepie2191 2008-04-27 ch 3, | abuseGreat story! Keep up the good work:) |
| zookitty 2008-04-25 ch 3, | abuseRodney just doesn't learn does he? -laughs- Beautiful story. John is so wonderful! The future of atlantis didn't matter quite as much without Rodney in it -grins- Great job! Excellent writting too -Zooky |
| lauren hedghog 2008-04-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseA wonderful story :-) |
| WritingtheWrong 2008-04-24 ch 3, | abuseI've been a fan since your M7 days. I'm sure glad you found Rodney. Another brilliant story. Lovely interaction between shepard and McKay and of course, some awesome whump! Thank you Hopefully next story coming in a couple of days?!? :) lol |
| angw 2008-04-24 ch 3, | abuseI like Sheppard's reasoning - “You saw potential in those books. I see it someplace else.” Very nice sentiment :) |
| ayumidah 2008-04-23 ch 3, | abuseaw poor Rodney, lol. Lovely story :D |
| timme 2008-04-23 ch 2, anon. | abusefool. he doomed a hundred thousand people. |
| tazmy 2008-04-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseRodney is going to be furious! Beautiful descriptions in this! |
| Silverthreads 2008-04-23 ch 3, | abuseWonderful story |