Really good job so far!
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I really liked your story. Will was won of my favorite characters in the movie and I was sad that they did show more of him in the movie so thought your story was perfect. Are you going to write more? You can't just stop now I want to know what happens to Will and Bridget and Beth! Please keep on writing

ohmigosh! This is wicked good so far! ^-^

i really like this chapter, keep up the good work
MGW

i really like this! dude you have to continue this, i only watched the movie a few daqys ago and i loved it!

Another good chapter. I was slightly confused at the shift from present to past (when Will first met Beth's family) but over all it's very well written. I like how you acknowledge that Will didn't lay the blame on Ben Wade for his father's death. A suggestion though, you say he's killed by 'Ben Wade's posse'. A posse in Western literature and movies is a group of people, usually deputized by the sheriff, to chase down a bad guy. As Ben Wade's men are the bad guys, they'd be better described as his 'gang'.

Your story has a good start, makes me very curious about what is to come. I hope you update quickly.