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Reviews For: For the Love of William Evans

mutated glow worm
2008-06-23
ch 4,
abusei really like this chapter, keep up the good work
MGW
mutated glow worm
2008-06-19
ch 3,
abusei really like this! dude you have to continue this, i only watched the movie a few daqys ago and i loved it!
Speakfire
2008-04-25
ch 2,
abuseAnother good chapter. I was slightly confused at the shift from present to past (when Will first met Beth's family) but over all it's very well written. I like how you acknowledge that Will didn't lay the blame on Ben Wade for his father's death. A suggestion though, you say he's killed by 'Ben Wade's posse'. A posse in Western literature and movies is a group of people, usually deputized by the sheriff, to chase down a bad guy. As Ben Wade's men are the bad guys, they'd be better described as his 'gang'.
Speakfire
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseYour story has a good start, makes me very curious about what is to come. I hope you update quickly.
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