Oh not bad! and Excellently written!

Please keep writing!

From your new fan! lol

ah! i want to read more! more i say! now!! please!

Excellent story! Ahh I adore Eomer and you write his character so well <3 Update soon

YAY! It Has Been Far Too Long! Please Say You Will Update Again Soon! I Seem To Have Spent WAY Too Much Time Re-reading The Same Three Chapters And Wondering If You Were Coming Back! Thanks For Updating! Please Do It Again Soon! This Is A Really Good Story With A Very Interesting Plot Line! Update Soon! Best Wishes, Whisperoak88

Ok, this maybe a little late, considering the last update date, but this is SUCH a good story, and you really have to keep writing, PLEASE! Anyhow, it's a really good story, and best wishes, Whisperoak88

Continue Please!

Hi. This is an interesting idea, but there are couple of things you need to watch out for. In one instance, you wrote Dúnedain as 'Dunedin'. For someone who lives in New Zealand, this is worthy of much laughter because that a city in the South Island of New Zealand.

The canon characters, especially Eowyn, seem a bit out of character. You might also want to check up on Aiden's characteristics. She's not a Mary Sue yet, but I'm sorry to say that she has that potential.

Anyway, good luck with the story.

I like the jesting but real sincerity behind the words.