Cute. Happy Birthday to you too(if that was a hint =D)!!

I hate to be a downer, but that first part;

"Tenten through the kunai"

should be 'threw'. The one you're using is 'I'm /through/ with my dinner'. This is /threw/ as in 'to throw'.

=B

But otherwise nice chap, looking forward ti the next! =)

Aw..Happy Birthday to you too as well as Tenten!

~Sai

Aw...so cute and so like them XD happy birthday to you as well then. bye bye

Despite my strong "Nejiten-ousness"... you really really made me like this pairing...

Really,really good chap.

I love this. It's really nice. I love your writing.

wow that was nice. add more soon

Temari and Tenten make good friends, don't they? I have to say I'm fond of them.

I loved how encouring, determined, Temari was, and how she really tried to show Tenten she could do it. and that Tenten did it. Great writing.

Aww... this is kinda saddening... but very easy to relate to. And that's what I like about it.

Happy New Year to you!

What you wrote rings a bit too true. That those things happen. A very moving chapter.

But that's terrible! I feel so bad for Tenten...she's forgotten in the manga, the anime, and fanfiction... :(
Happy New Year, and hopefully there'll be a happier story?

Okay I'm confused. I'd redo this if I were you as a sepearte chapter

The last one was really wonderfull, natural and living! Seems like we are standing beside them all the time, the muffin scent and stuff, and common situations with rumours and misunderstandings. You've pulled it out perfectly.
I'm also very glad, that you find KankuTen appealing - maybe it means that you will write a separate fic about them? That would be wonderfull.
Pleased, Ksu.

Haha. That was interesting. Temari being overprotective cracks me up. Lol.

And actually, you make me appreciate Kankuro being with Tenten too though I'd perfer Neji and Tenten to work out. But I don't mind it

Great job.