I wonder who had it worst, Yuan Shao, Liu Bei, or Xun Yu(He didn't commit suicide after Cao Cao took the title of Duke of Wei) When will Yuan Shao come to his resolve? Hmm hmm.

Real trippy, man... At least, that's the impression I got from this chapter.

I enjoyed reading the first two chapters. You have the ability as a writer yourself to make this story awesome. Update soon!

Ok, the very last sentence scared me a bit. Is this closet Yaoi, or?... Anyways, not bad so far. As Dynasty Guy put it, your writing has dramatically improved. Nice work there.

Whoa, nice portrayal of Lord Yuan Shu!

Not bad Scholar. Your writing ability has dramatically improved.

I like the looks of this so far. Don't be like me and take forever to update your fics if you can help it.

Nice idea. There are some periods missing, and other trivial details, but overall the story is very interesting. Please keep this up.

A story about Yuan Shao huh? Kudos, There aren't much around ;)
I liked the part about Cao Cao and him arguing. It's kind of neat to see such old guys (in the game) portraied as these kids.

-Ying