This was my second time through. Your story gets better with each re-reading. Your characters are so real, and the pain and hardship they go through is so believable, the way they deal and conquer is really inspiring. Thank-you so much for sharing this story. I know i'll be back again.

That was an incredible story. Thank you

Man this story packs a wallop. It is very dark and complex, and very good at emotional rollercoasters. I feel a little wrung out after reading it. Good job on writing this.

Oh, that was something special. It was fantastically written and I adored every part of it. Heartbeakingly realistic and so very human.

Wonderful story.

Look at that, I think I'm your 100 review!

Wow, this story was really awesome, I never thought I'd get to care enough for an OC but your good doc really got to me, her suffering and feelings were real and the story in general is so realistic. There could not be a happy ending, not at all after everything the witch did. I like your take on the events, the reactions to these happenings, your characters' development and well, characterization was really good.

My heart broke at Jeb's death, and DG's guilt for him, for her sister, for everything that happened because of her actions. I liked a lot your Az as well, and the Queen.

I was a very enjoyable lecture, very well worked, the environments, the narrations, the dialogs, the flow and rhythm of the lecture. Truly awesome. Thanks a lot for this incredible story.

I really liked the reference to the Red Sox!

I am loving Doc's observations of Cain and DG. It's the best part of the story so far. I just wanna snuggle protective!Cain.

Is this in your lj too? I'm not sure if I'm just not clicking on the right links.

Whoa...the ending of this one was a doozy. I'm trying to remember why DG would be at the camp instead of at the tower with her family after the witch's defeat.

I originally started to read this on you live journal page, but couldn't find anything after chapter 8, but I saw on your LJ page that you wrote 5 think left unsaid, and I knew I have that on my favorite list on . So, I went there, I hope and pray that you put this story on your page! Thankfully you did! Ok, on with my review!

Let me say WOW you can tell a story! :) First with the sick AZ, and getting the Doc to help, then with the guilt with DG, then you killing Jeb(never saw that coming!), more guilt for DG, and everything else. This story blew my mind, there were a few time in the story I actually found myself getting anger, of when you killed jeb that was a mix there sad and anger, Again knowone kills Jeb(or at least any of the stories I've read.) SO that was a big shocker! And after that I was fearful for DG there were a few time when it didn't look so great for her. If you would have killed DG I would have love the story just much becouse I love author who do the unexpected it make it more life like.

Well, this is my longest review ever! bye.

*tears up like none other* just.. yeah.. lovely.

Dear gods, this has got to be one of the most heartwrenching stories I have ever read. There are tears in my eyes and my heart aches. You truly have a way with words.

Thank you. I found your story yesterday and finished it today. I'm rather glad I didn't find it sooner as I don't know I could have handled the cliffies. That was a beautiful tale, althought I was hoping against hope that Jeb would somehow still show up at the end (well, make an appearance alive). It really was one of the most well written Tin Man stories I've seen. Thank you again for sharing it.

Wow. I'm completely blown away by this story. It is well and truly amazing and I believe you have a beautiful gift. The emotions were so real and true that it was hard to muddle out what I was feeling because it was so strong. Congratulations on a beautiful and wonderful story.

Awesome! I loved it! I really liked DG being drawn into her darker side and Az becoming the voice of reason. You painted a dark, interesting imagine of the battlefield. Nice work.

Stupid story making me cry...What a wonderful job! This story is far from stupid (I was just angry that it made me cry again). You did an amazing job!