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fictionlover94
2009-06-17 . chapter 2
I love it i was laughing at all the right parts.
c
2009-04-18 . chapter 2
tis was funny
haso.namikazi soul reaper
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
woo!good job dude/tte
bsc9999
2008-08-12 . chapter 2
aw...poor harvey...heh, poor guy. that mustve been real torture for him.
Ash Gray
2008-07-19 . chapter 2
Two words:

EPIC. WIN.

Perhaps that'll teach Harvey NOT to screw with other people's computers, ever.

And Fanny in "revenge mode" is scary... O_O
Ash Gray
2008-07-19 . chapter 1
I don't know why this fic missed my notice... but to make it up, I'll review it!

Well, um... this brings matchmaking to a whole new level. I only hope this doesn't become a recurring habit. ^^;

And yes, Harvey is a sadist.
NigelRachel4eva
2008-07-10 . chapter 2
*teary-eyed with laughter*
OMG! This is hilarious! xDD Espcially Harvey's reactions and plans. You really are a comedy king.

1/362 forever!
NigelRachel4eva
2008-07-10 . chapter 1
Aw... that was so cute! And so innovative of Harvey too ^^

1/362 forever!
smaginn
2008-06-03 . chapter 2
ha! OWNED...
that was so funny.
maybe you shoud make it M, though, becasue of harvey's violence, and rach and nigels fake sex.
Numbuh six-sixtysix
2008-05-07 . chapter 2
Damn you have a twisted, evil mind. Harvey's plans are sick. Apart from that, seriously nice. This had me in stitches, especially the pin drop line.
«J$N$»
2008-05-05 . chapter 2
Dude dat was frikkn awesome lol nicely dun
DarkMike 15
2008-05-04 . chapter 2
Hell hath no fury? The devil himself is wetting his pants right about now!this has got to be the single most funny thing i have ever read on this site! 10/10 dude!
Tetsu Deinonychus
2008-05-04 . chapter 2
Wow, Harvey is borderline "Shisu-con" in this fic! Interesting how his mind goes right to "incest threesome" when Rachel tells him to learn to love Nigel.

This was dark, perverted and hilarious.

Laughed my head off at the bits where she claimed to be pregnant, and the Vegas drive through wedding. And the "Maple Syrup" reference was hysterical!

Umm.. watch the "calling a guy girly as an insult" thing. Some of us guys LIKE being a little bit girly, and we'd rather not be associated with...that.

Anyway, LOVED THIS STORY!
Nigel's Leading Woman
2008-05-03 . chapter 2
That was amazing. I had a real good laugh reading it. Way to go, dude! You really pulled it off! Kudos to you.

... I'm scared of Harvey even more now, just to let you know. XD
lemony anemone
2008-05-03 . chapter 2
“The only way he could catch me was if he put me to sleep with one of his boring speeches. Adonis was killed by a boar. I’d be killed by Numbuh 363, the biggest bore of all.”

“Numbuh 1 said I was pretty. You said I wasn’t a girl. Gee, who shall I choose?”

These lines were really funny. I had to laugh and laugh...and laugh. =D

Your descriptions of what Harvey would do to Nigel were wow. gruesome. but really, I think it must have taken you some effort to think of them. and the Hand, Foot and Mouth disease? even though it's real, it sounds like something out of a knd universe. really well done all the way through. hopefully you're not tired of writing knd fiction. your story ideas are really good, and you write well too. wow. *rolls eyes* compliment after compliment...but you deserve them. Nice job.
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