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| OhThoseEyes 2008-05-09 ch 3,  | abuseThat was really sweet! |
| NickTonyK 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseLOVED the end! Wish there could be more. Hope the shows creators could read this! Any stories focused on Tony are always appreciated! Good job! |
| Sweetcheeksncis 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseYea, more! Great, well written, and beautiful! |
| M E Wofford 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseNice wrapup! Good little story. |
| Angel of the Night Watchers 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseI love it! This was so good, I really liked the emotions Tony showed. He puts on a big macho front but I think deep down inside he's a huge teddy bear. |
| Cable Addict 2008-04-29 ch 2, | abuseWow. This is really good so far. Keep up the good work. |
| Sweetcheeksncis 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseOMG! WOW! This chapt is great! Deep, intense, and very well written! So glad you decided to write another chapter on this! IS there going to be more? Please! |
| Angel of the Night Watchers 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abuseI like this. You did a good job. continuing the story might not be a bad idea |
| NickTonyK 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abuseI like this story , but I never did like Jeane! I'm glad that Ziva is there for Tony, I hope they finally get together! |
| M E Wofford 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abuseI think you must continue this story! |
| murmure etoile 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abuseI really missed a scene like that!! So perfect, without a word... Thank you!! |
| M E Wofford 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseHopefully, you will continue with the story and tell us what she does for him, and I don't really mean in a sexual way, although that may be part of it. I myself thought last night at the end of the episode that she needed to go to him. |
| Angel of the Night Watchers 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseAw. This is good. I agree with you, Tony and Ziva belong together. I kinda got this feeling from the episode too, she wants to help doesn't know how. |
| bookworm45 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| Sweetcheeksncis 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWished this would have been on the episode! Very well written on Ziva's thoughts about the situation! Great drabble! |