Really nice piece. Loved the fight with Doomsday and the narrative perspective from Diana's PoV. I'm about to read your other one-shot of SM/WW, if it's half as good as this I would hope you did a chapter story of SM/WW(or SM/anyone not named Lois) in the future.

I think I read this on the SM/WW website but I’ll review here. Great action battle with Doomsday and Diana and Clark fighting together. So sweet of Diana to help Clark recover and have them finally admit how much they mean to each other. :) I must admit I’m surprised about Lois’ behavior. I knew she would be jealous and dislike the possibility of Diana and Clark together but she was a real witch here. Oh, well at least our fav couple got together. Nice job.

Loved it. Loved it. Yes. I said it twice, but you deserve it. Very nice. :) (fav)

This is just about the greatest stories I have read on this site. I love the pairing and it all seemed really real. I also can't believe people think it's batman and wonder woman. Anyway great story and hope one day you will make more.

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

I am a BM/WW shipper. I do like the SM/WW stories, however, and this one started out well. I must agree with another review about the middle arc of the story. The politics in the middle section really didn't work for me. A touch preachy.

Also, in response to your author's note, I do not see the end of JLU making a BM/WW relationship impossible. In fact, I felt it left it kind of open ... the whole 'you have my number' line. But, I suppose you could take that many different ways.

Anyway, thanks for posting it!

Great story Snake. Makes sense that Diana would be there to help him fight Doomsday, what with her stellar combat skills and her closeness to Kal. I'd read this earlier, but I never got around to giving a review.

You story had a good dose of everything in it- very intense action, drama, nailbiting suspense and some very sweet Kal and Di romance. All the right ingredients for a real delicacy there. The only problem I had was with the politics which went into a tad overkill, but that's a minor gripe. All in all, a very engaging read. Keep up the great work and hoping to see more SM/WW from you.

PS: For all 18 and above fans of SM/WW, here's my new crazyfic about the pair. Be warned, it's rated R, but hey, Diana's got to have a devious side to her as well right? -
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And Snake, if you're not already onboard, here's a group that's sure to interest you- http://groups./adultconf?dest=%2Fgroup%2FSuperman-n-WonderWoman%2F. It's the yahoo group for SM/WW.

Until next time. Take Care, and stay healthy!

This was a realy great story ,so please keep up the great work.

Great story I hope you write another Superman and Wonder Woman story also great discription of Lois Lane

Not bad I like it Superman and Wonder Woman would be the perfect couple I also agree with the Batman and Wonder Woman thing Batman as Bruce Wayne is a playboy and things like that would get your ass kicked by Diana

Well, as much as I love SM/WW fics, this one turned sour halfway through. It had a great start, but than went downhill when you started with the whole 'get a tissue sample' thing.

First off, The United States would never try to force the collection of such a tissue sample. Even if some small group of politicians clamored for it, the other 9/10ths of the country would shout it down. And even if it somehow got through Congress, it would immediately be challenged in the Supreme Court and shot down.

Honestly, this whole thing sounded more like your personal politics being inserted into the story, and the story was cheapened for it.

I loved very good story. There were a few mistakes in punctuation and grammer but nothing too bad where I couldn't understand it. And I agree with you Batman and Wonder Woman don't belong together it should be Superman and Wonder Woman, but sadly that cannot be with Lois Lane in the picture! Of course I have nothing against her I just hate the fact that she's with Superman instead of Wonder Woman. I'm adding this story to my favorite stories list and you to my favorite authors list! You're a very gifted and talented writer!

Great job! Really interesting, engaging, and most importantly romantic. Write another soon.

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Good job!

Okay,Snake,absolutely great.The action sequences were awesome.I could see it in my mind's eye.I always wondered that when Superman fought Doomsday,that it made sense that Wonder Woman(best melee fighter according to some?) should be around to at least help.And this pairing as you know is my favorite.Diana in the JLU and the Batgroupie thing always never sat well with me.Diana was supposed to be a rookie amazon and ambassador of peace and her persona as a whole was lost in favor of her physical prowess.And Bruce is way too moody and obsessed.Kal is laid back and good humored. I can see someone like Diana who herself is under tremendous pressure with her job,and title etc working better with a mellow man.
I like the scenes with her and Hippolyta.It drives home that Diana with any man would have to get the blessing of her mother and sisters and only Kal could be the one they would give her up to willingly.Except Artemis of course.
I want to see a wedding.Pretty please?