Reviews for Lost Without You

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kataragirl11 2008-08-09 ch 6,	abuseI'm glad Yuna and Tidus worked everything out. And Tidus is quite amusing. Keep going!
Waiting for your Whistle 2008-08-08 ch 6,	abusewoohoo nice fic! update soon!
sanchez2010 2008-08-07 ch 6,	abuseWoot Woot. That kiss between Yuna and Tidus was HOTT! Good job. I think this might be my favorite chapter yet. I can't wait till you update again! I'm addicted!
.14karatgold. 2008-08-06 ch 6,	abuseDon't worry about it. Every story has their filler chapters. At least Yuna and Tidus made up. That's something. Oh, AND you put the RikkuGippal puzzle piece together. That's something too. So yeah, it wasn't the best chapter, but you'll have those. It's no big deal. Haha. It keeps you modest. =] kt
Puggles Master 2008-08-06 ch 6,	abuseI hope Rikku doesn't get her heart broken. I like the introduction to Paine. And Wakka can be so oblivious. Good chapter. Keep it up.
kataragirl11 2008-07-27 ch 5,	abuseNo! Tidus and Yuna must stay together, they're so great together. But Tidus really needs to kick his habit of going to the bar. It's bad for his health. Great chapter!
Puggles Master 2008-07-25 ch 5,	abuseWhoa, Seymour is a frequent customer at the grill Yuna works at. . . creepy. Interesting how when she needed Tidus most, he wasn't there. I liked the conversation between the two, and how you introduced Gippal and Baralai, without making it a big thing. Great chapter. Update soon.
.14karatgold. 2008-07-25 ch 5,	abuseThere's not much to say that I haven't already said, but I loved how Tidus went and got drunk after having a fight with his dad for drinking. Yuna's right. He is being a hypocrite. I don't really see her calling him a baby on top of that, but hey, it's your script. Anyway, good update. I'm still loving it! =D kt
sanchez2010 2008-07-24 ch 5,	abuseAww. Tidus can be such a Butt at times. I hope he realized he made a big mistake and he should apologize to Yuna! And poor Yuna having her own problems and then having to deal with Seymour and a Drunk Tidus in the same day! Wow the girl gots skills LOL! Well I can't wait till you update. I hope its soon!
typical 2008-07-22 ch 4,	abusei'm interested in this story, so please update! i can't wait to see what happens, and what the storyline exactly is.
sanchez2010 2008-07-21 ch 4,	abuseAww! How cute, they finally both admitted that they like each other! It's about time. I can't beleive how cute they are together! And ther little kisses! You can't get any better than that! Keep up the good work! I can't wait till you update again!
.14karatgold. 2008-07-21 ch 4,	abuseAh! Perfect! You've got their characters so exact, that everything they do seems just perfect and not too/unrealistically fluffy. I love it! Everything's going so well, I just can't help but think that the other shoe's gonna drop soon enough. Can't wait for that! (Haha. I'm horrible, I know.) This is the best chapter, by far. It's just so exact, so smooth, and the writing is wonderful. Love it, love it! This is probably the first AU that I've read that has such precision and understand of who the characters are. By being so true to their characters, you make their AU world real, and fit to be considered an accurate AU. Beautiful! I can't wait for more! kt
Puggles Master 2008-07-21 ch 4,	abuseGood chapter. I like how you showed Tidus' home life, really good perspective to why Tidus is the way he is sometimes. I loved the flashback. I also really like how Rikku doesn't care what her cousin thinks, and how Tidus is constantly wondering about Yuna. The two are cute together. I thought the very ending was hilarious. Update soon.
Puggles Master 2008-07-16 ch 3,	abuseI like the witty remarks between Yuna and Tidus, the obvious attraction to each other. Wakka has perfect timing. I like how you show the progression of Tidus feeling more comfortable and trusting when around Yuna. Rikku's hilarious. Interesting take on Lulu. I like the difference in making her initially very open and welcoming vs condescending and closed. I thought what Wakka and Lulu said about Tidus and Yuna was interesting as well. Great chapter. Update soon.
sanchez2010 2008-07-16 ch 3,	abuseAw, He finally kissed her. They are too cute when they start flirting. It's also good to see Tidus not so depressed anymore! I can't wait till you update again!!

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