M cookies... XD 'Text that' Go Axel! Roxa,s stop ignoring him; your phone's hopefully gonna die sooner than he is so devote more time to someone who will actually feel about you, rather than technology. Bwahahaha I loved this!

F.
That. Was. Cute.
It was also written well.
Keep it up!

I lol'd hard at this. xD Awesome job. It was hilarious and so cute. x3

hahaha my teacher said that too. This was so cute! X3

Awwh that was dead cute xD
Axel & Roxas would be the most perfect couple ever
=]

Lawl. That was soo funny! -still laughing while I type which is getting to be pretty hard- ^^ ...now where's my cookie? -demands it- J/K.

Hehe, this was cute! Roxas seemed kind of whiny in this one. =P

That made me giggle! ^_^

this was awesome. it points out probably another good reason why i don't text. hell, i don't even use my cell phone that much.
at any rate, this was very well done. very easy to visualize and very good dialouge.

i loved it, keep writting!

...AW! That was so adorable! I really can see Roxie with that phone!

This was a funny story. I'm not a really big Axel/Roxas shipper, but this was very cute. Good job!