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Reviews for: Take Two
The Duelist's Heiress
2008-11-22 . chapter 3
That was interesting. I liked the update.

TDH
JazzinLyric
2008-07-20 . chapter 2
Well, I'm certainly glad you decided to continue. :) Your dialogue skills are still very good and I find your modern day Erik rather interesting (plus I loved the Kay element you put in there about Sasha). Keep on writin'; your story shows much promise.

~Jazz
The Duelist's Heiress
2008-07-13 . chapter 2
Nice chapter. Well worth the wait.

TDH
JazzinLyric
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
That was rather interesting! You know, I never really give modern Phantom stories a chance, but I'll give this one an exception - it's time I expended my boundaries anyway. =D Your modern versions are rather intriguing and I'd like to see more of this story. Also, I enjoyed your smooth flow of conversation; it seems you have a knack for it. Keep on writing!

~Jazz
The Duelist's Heiress
2008-04-24 . chapter 1
I like this a lot.
TDH
IAmTheMaskYouWear
2008-04-23 . chapter 1
i like the story so far...keep writing! :)
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