 Kali Rose 2009-11-27 . chapter 4 w00teth for James cheering Stacey up! Of course, now he has an advantage... John may be the modern Raoul, but if I were Stacey I would never date someone who did that to me. Hell, I'd probably kick him in the family jewels XD Great job, though! |
 The Duelist's Heiress 2009-11-27 . chapter 4Wonderful. Gr...Lemme at those jerks!
Aw I loved the end of the chap.
Sorry my idea didn't help that much...
Keep up the great work.
I need a recommendation for December and want to do this one as it.
Again,keep up the great work.
TDH |
 Kali Rose 2009-11-21 . chapter 3 Normally I'm not a fan of reincarnation stories, but you write this so well! I love James, and Stacey is definately a modern Christine. And even Don Juan is back! Will they ever find out the truth? Will Stacey go with James? Will I ever stop asking questions? We'll find out- when you update XD
(And maybe for chapter four, you could describe a scene from Stacey's school life? Maybe any somewhat-friends and enemies (for the love of bacon don't name one Carly or Carla- so cliched!)? Ah, well, it's your choice) |
 The Duelist's Heiress 2008-11-22 . chapter 3That was interesting. I liked the update.
TDH |
 JazzinLyric 2008-07-20 . chapter 2Well, I'm certainly glad you decided to continue. :) Your dialogue skills are still very good and I find your modern day Erik rather interesting (plus I loved the Kay element you put in there about Sasha). Keep on writin'; your story shows much promise.
~Jazz |
 The Duelist's Heiress 2008-07-13 . chapter 2Nice chapter. Well worth the wait.
TDH |
 JazzinLyric 2008-05-09 . chapter 1That was rather interesting! You know, I never really give modern Phantom stories a chance, but I'll give this one an exception - it's time I expended my boundaries anyway. =D Your modern versions are rather intriguing and I'd like to see more of this story. Also, I enjoyed your smooth flow of conversation; it seems you have a knack for it. Keep on writing!
~Jazz |
 The Duelist's Heiress 2008-04-24 . chapter 1I like this a lot.
TDH |
 IAmTheMaskYouWear 2008-04-23 . chapter 1i like the story so far...keep writing! :) |