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| HellfireSupremacy 2008-05-07 ch 7, | abuseWow. Just...wow. I hereby declare this the first masterpiece of the AW:DoR fandom. A perfect blend of realistic detail--in soldier PoV no less--with the surreal insanity of Penny, Caulder, Creeper Virus, and the meteor apocalypse. Your dramatic narration, descriptive urban setting, robust dialouge, strong character development, and beleivable OCs make for a compelling story. And that chapter where Mr. Bear is taken hostage and held at gun point...that was just brilliant. Penny's mood shift from her normal hyper-insanity to icy-cold "I will stare you down until you die" insanity fit the moment perfectly. |
| Delta-Angelfire 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI registered on the site just so I could say how much I enjoyed this story. You characterizations are impeccable and the plot is throughly engaging. I hope you get "the itch" to write another one sometime soon! |
| keeperofthescarf 2008-04-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseGreat story, very intense. I've not played the new AW yet, so I don't know what's going on, but the characters are interesting and there were great action scenes. :) |