Your a very good writer! I can kinda see Jean doing.

Jean being the bad girl? You really go where few authors dare to go. She's completely natural, and nothing she says that you wrote from her perspective strikes as being not correct, something Jean would never think. The comparison at the end really gives the piece a meaning, so it isn't mere drabble. It has a purpose.

You you you! I can't stop reading your material. It's very entertaining. You can captivate some of the most primal emotions, and that it stunning. Please, for the sake of my eyes and brain and reading needs, keep up the great writing work.

nice descriptions. I like the observations of how his behavior in private (or assumed private) differ from his public behavior. The scars and the tatoo also add a bit of mystery, when did he get them? How ( scars) and why( tatoo)?

I particularly liked the point about Jean feeling that she had taken advantage of Scott, and perhaps she shouldn't be so quick to judge Logan. Maybe she didn't kill Scott, but spying on him was a definite wrong to him.

:) that was awesome. i am such a fan of your writing, and this was another winner. write more! i LOVE your scott!

Great stuff, Min, even though I've read it before. This is one of my favorites of yours. Dunno what else to say about it, other than I've decided to review all your stories on . Be afraid. _

This is awesome. If I were to have started out with this concept it would have just degenerated into something very NC-17 in a matter of paragraphs, thanks to my "one track male mind". Your creativity blows my mind. I like how you keep things realistic too... Jean's thoughts are thoughts that I could have were I spying on a naked showering girl that was hot and blind...

Keep up the good work.

Peace

Gouki

You're a special person. I liked the story a whole big lot. Hey, why not...write more?

aw this is actually really touchy, what i like most about ulitmate the characters are sharper, not seen through glass, imprinted on the class. Like real life these days, solid , edgy

Absolutely wonderful story!

People write ultimate x-men? Wooohoooo. Good story, I liked the insight into Jeans mind. V. good!

I don't think I told you how much I appreciate your stories nearly enough. You're one of my two favorite X-Men writers of any kind (mostly because you write all universes and you write long and LOTS), so I hope you write your how Scott met Jean romantic comedy soon, along with finishing Heyoka 2 (I read that 'til 3 in the morning and then it's a CLIFFHANGER?).. aw heck, write anything and I'll gobble it up like a psychotic dog. Nice metaphor, I know.