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Reviews For: Natural Progression

Ca va aller mieux
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuseA story that sort of makes you think "huh".

This is probably the biggest "what-might-have-been" of the entire saga. I've never though to this before!
Sexy Scottish Accent
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseHmm...*nods contemplatively* That's a very interesting take on things. I like it a lot. Luke seems like a totally different person.
scc1fan
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseWow...I really liked that! Very descriptive. A job well done!

Kas
dm1
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseI don't think those were hallucinations, Luke! That was your sister battling Darth Vader.

Interesting take on another path Luke could have taken. So he turned the droid in to the Imps, thus saving Beru and Lars... and Ben lived long enough to die of natural causes at an older age. At least Luke is doing something that he has a talent for, repairing speeders, and he has money left to get droids to help on the farm.

Well done!
Quillian
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseWow, simple fic... and yet something chilling about that at the same time, probably Luke's indifference to it all with the road not taken (also the road which should have been taken, you might say). Good work.
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