Hello. I would just like to quickly give my sincere compliments on such a wonderful, beautiful piece of poetry. The relationship of Farah and the Prince has always been one of my most favorite romance stories, and your poem has really brought that inviting spirit back to me. My favorite lines are the last few stanzas: "Hold me, Love me, Warm me with your touch, Hide not your love from me, Prince." That really hit it home for me...

I usually give advice to whatever I read (usually because there's always something that can be improved), but in my honest opinion, this is just about as perfect as it can get; it's short, sweet, and to the point, just the way I like poems. ;)

Very well done, Sakura. I hope to see more of your work in the future and have a very nice day! :)

*Rose*