I don't know whether or not you have "musical talent" as you call it, but you have quite a future writing songs. That was brilliantly done. The balance and rhythm were just right, and the emotions evoked by the "lyrics" were so very Mrs. Lovett. I honestly wish this had been put to music so I could hear it!

LOVE IT!

i like it. nice job.

Aww it's sweet but sad. I like it! ^^

he drowns absoulutly everything out. lol. your good. right mor in da future/

Aw this was really good. You worded her emotions so perfectly!

i really enjoyed this, could definitely imagine our favourite baker singing this sadly whilst no-one around her paid any attention (especially not our favourite murderous barber)
really well written, vair well done!

I really enjoyed that. I could definitely see Mrs. Lovett singing something like that, and as I was reading, I put the words to a sort of soft piano melody -- similar to Wait, but a little different. I don't know why, but it seemed to fit. ^.^

The only thing that stuck out as odd to me was this line:

Won’t you forget
your Lucy
she’s gone…
Dead, and gone.

If Mrs. Lovett had ever actually said that Lucy was dead, then her argument at the end of the play (". . . said she took a poison, she did, never said that she died . . .") wouldn't be valid. Granted, Todd is only half-listening to her here, but still, if Mrs. Lovett says she never lied, then she probably never lied (she may twist the truth quite a bit though). Anyway, apart from that, I really liked it, thanks for a nice read. :)

*sniffs* Beautiful...flows beautifully...simple impeccable.

wow! did you write that yourself?? psh, and you say you have no musical talent! i think that was very good! very well written and IC and i absolutely LOVE the song lyrics!
this is really good and sweet, although kinda sad, too! the lyrics tied in perfectly with mrs. lovett's character and personality!
great job!
looking forward to more from you! =D