Fun story! I enjoyed reading it.

great story! really enjoyed this...=) you write the characters so well...

Really sweet and well-written ficlet. I like your characterizations of the team members and the hints at that "communal sleeping lodge" very much. That reminds me of how Team Sheppard always seems to find trouble of some kind or another when off-world. *happy fan girl sigh*

Cute.

You know, I sort of like seeing John get into trouble by, oh, falling into a well as opposed to getting beat on by the Wraith. Those kind of stories always make me smile. Another lovely little story.

A nice surprise! Always glad to discover a "new' writer. Enjoyed reading this teamfic.

Cute! XD

I love the team banter and the mental images of them trying to fit themselves into the space provided. The conversation about Teyla kicking in her sleep was excellent. Much team goodness here!

This was an enjoyable read. Loved the lightness despite the bit of whump. I really enjoyed Teyla and Ronon this time.

I liked this.

LOL... “Stupid Ancients, stupid darkness, stupid well. Sheppard needs to learn to keep his damn light on the floor. Stupid Colonel.”

Very nice job!

Great story.

Cool one-shot, I like how all the team members care for each other, they're not just colleges but also best friends :)And I also like the way they always get theirselves into trouble lol. If there is a well somewhere, John just hàs to fall in it lol.
greetz: Wraith Fan -x-

yeah i think sheppards been beat up enough for one offworld trip lol :)

I did enjoy this story and the bed pit reminded me so much of those Swiss duvets (comforters) that are the most heavenly things to sleep on - yes, my memories of such things are great so no doubt the team will have great memories of this incident too.