 gseedlover 2008-05-26 . chapter 2sounds like an interesting story... cant wait to read the next chapter. update soon if you can ^^ |
 sunken ship 2008-05-22 . chapter 2I never imagined Athrun being jealous of Kira and Lacus - it seems kind of out of character to me - but I suppose that with everything that's happened, it seems like a natural reaction. Just, not an Athrun reaction. On the other hand, I like the way you made Athrun try to wave off his injury. I hope you'll show what happened to other characters (Shinn, Luna, Murrue, Mue, Dearka, Yzak...) as well. |
 neji447 2008-05-22 . chapter 1Nice Start, Great chapters...Funny names through ^.^ good luck in ur next chapters! update soon! |
 neji447 2008-05-22 . chapter 2Short but sweet chapter, Hope u update soon ^.^ |
 SamuraiGirl7 2008-05-21 . chapter 2So sad you've only got 4 reviews. I think you've got a great base for a story going here and I look forward to seeing where it will lead.
Keep it up.
~SamuraiGirl7 |
 MysticalSaphira 2008-05-21 . chapter 2How wonderful! You have such a good feeling for each character's emotions - Athrun's view of the war and his opinion of Meyrin were really right for his character. I also loved the piece about Kira x Lacus being just a little bit plastic with it's subtle hints of bitterness about his own relationships. His banter with Kira made me laugh as well - I like it when they have that brotherly bonding going on. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you dear! Keep up the good work =) |
 MysticalSaphira 2008-05-08 . chapter 1See, I knew I would love reading your written work! I love the insight into Cagalli and her work in the council and her love for Orb. It was refreshing to see something that revolved around her and her country and the trials that she has with it. I look forward to seeing more from you dear! Update soon =) |
 VRSanime200009 2008-04-24 . chapter 1luving the story so far but tell me who is the main couple here?
AsuCaga or AsuMey? |
 ath-29-cags 2008-04-24 . chapter 1Nice story!Please update sooner! _Dyan_ |