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hales716
2008-08-17
ch 16,
abuseomg! i love love love this story! i know you havent updated in awhile, but...
COULD YOU!??!?!?!
bleedinglove93
2008-08-13
ch 16,
abusei love it continue
Kiara Kou
2008-08-09
ch 16,
abuseOMG i love it ¡¡

cant wait for more =)

update ASAP ¡
Bite Me87
2008-08-07
ch 16,
abuseLOVE it! please update soon!
kate
2008-07-25
ch 15, anon.
abuseWill you be continuing this story?
oceaneyes85253
2008-07-24
ch 16,
abuseThis story is so good so far! Please keep writing.
lenny85
2008-07-18
ch 16,
abusei love this story!!
you need to update like RIGHT NOW!
great job!
momma2three
2008-07-18
ch 16,
abuseloved the chapter. will be be getting another update soon?
nikkerz
2008-07-13
ch 15,
abuse(I'm actually trying to review to the disney land chapter)
Whoops, i just remebered that are the top you wrote that it wasn't disneyland rides. Sorry! Anwyays, still love it!
nikkerz
2008-07-13
ch 16,
abuseI love your story!!
just one question, have you been to disney land in california? I dont mean to sound like a critic, but i went there.. about 4 years ago. I dont remeber any of those rides, but if you haven't been there and made this up, i totaly understnad. If you have and it's all actually there, then i better plan another trip!!

Again, i love it! Hope you update soon!
bella book worm
2008-07-09
ch 16,
abusetotally awsome!!
Panda Blitz Cullen
2008-07-09
ch 16,
abuseOMG Really Good, Awesome Plot, I love ur writing! Oh and Edward. Is Jacob Black Going to be in the story Anytime in the upcoming Future>
brittany cullen 4ever
2008-06-27
ch 16,
abuselove this! good story! update soon please!
Misses-Edward-Cullen
2008-06-26
ch 16,
abuseI like the disneyland chapter!! =pp
Erica -Practicemakesperfect...
2008-06-26
ch 16,
abusePlease update soon!
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