Reviews for Memorial of the Heart

Rolling guy no 1 2004-12-10 ch 1,	abuseThe Story is good--except there are too many japanese phrases I DO NOT understand.
Skyrocket 2001-11-09 ch 2,	abuseThis is an interesting start. Your male lead is certainly different that the way the guy is usually played in TM fics. But I think you should forget about tossing in all that Japanese. It just kills the story's flow.
Hellcop 2001-10-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis seems like a good start, but ditch the Japanese phrases. I understood what was being said, but some people are sure not to.