this is a good story

YES! Finally SOMEONE has a BRAIN! I COMPLETELY agree! All my friends are like, "Well, Edward's hot, so who really cares?"

I don't find Robert Pattinson attractive AT ALL, so I completely disagree! (No offense, if you like him).

I LOVE THE STORY!

But I'm kinda confused with the wole 'colt' thing!

Update soon! -

lmao on your rant on twilight movie and ya the book was better than the movie and i like the movie and i think when the flashes of pictures as edward is sucking bella blood is memories of both edward and her together and some of their own memories anyways i do hope u update this summer as u stated lol

i love it and oh boy so bela is a demon but she just added a l to it to appear human am i right anyways hope u update soon

interesting so dean and bella huh my guess i know what dean was hiding or what it seemed like he was hiding his relationship with bella

Ok i like the story if u chose to continue it ! Emmett was great in twilight he was so funny and alice was good to im also giving credit to the nomads but edward was trying to hard and the effects were so fake im not even goin to start on bella she sounded like a guy and she was always stuttering also she looked mental in the studio lol also when edward sparkled it made noises lol

ok this was insightful but keep going wityh the stroy i really like it

i agree with you in these points. when i saw the movie on PPV, they skipped the whole thing of bella getting away from jasper in the airport, to get to the ballet studio. and it was not nighttime when she got there! or did she get a taxi! they also skipped the whole thing of finding out Alices past. i thought that that was a very important part of the book because we are always told how alice can't remember her human life, and later on they may mention alice knowing who changed her from James, but people who didn't read the book will be confused because they never showed james saying anything about alices past. but in the books and movie, i thought it was pretty stupid in the baseball feild when edward told bella to put her hair down from the ponytail. it was like he was trying to get her killed. then in biology the first time, 'edward' actually covered his nose. HE WAS SUPPOSED TO STOP BREATHING! Covering your nose like that is just plain rude. he shouldve done less obviousley at least.

Lmao. Yes...some parts were...messed up. But cmon! It's a movie...you can't expect them to put ALL the scenes on there, they had to cut parts off and change them a little to make the movie an hour long. It wasn't the best movie, but it was just the first one. Everything can't be AMAZING and exactly like the movie. Lmao, I agree with with Jasper looking "overly constipated" and a little awkward. I agree that Kristen Stewart was a little too dramatic...but she wasn't all that bad. Well, there's a new director for New Moon...so it might be a little different...hopefully. :D

short story but good so far. is bella a vampire or not. also what is colt. please write some more chapter soon.

shit! i wanted this to continue!

It's good! Keep updating ASAP!

So BELA is BELLA with a english accent?

okay.

so just to be clear.

there's BELA. the british thief

then there's BELLA. edawrd's woman. right?