Excellent story - unique plot - excellent character development. It was a very nice story, quite entertaining. I know you haven't updated this fic in a while, so I will be impatiently awaiting one. I have placed you on my favorite author's list on the weight of this story alone. Keep up the good work.

Interesting, especially the family-bonds. The idea for this story is good, and you've written it well.

Let's see if you can keep up this good work.

Awaiting the next chapters,

STEVE

Something I have noticed in this story is how much like his father Shinji is becoming. It's ironic when you consider how much he hated his father for the way he treated him. He still holds a piece of himself but I wonder how long it will take for that to be devoured by the part of him that is his father.

This is a good story, keep up the good work. Can't wait to see where this is going.

Wow, this fic is really great. Hope you haven't given up on this, though it seems as though it has been sitting for a while.

But I really liked the way you characterized the children, especially Nagisa's playful attitude.

Please don't give up on this fic, and please continue it soon!

SYNAID, GET YOUR THINKING CAP AND START FINISHING THE NEXT CHAPTER, NOW ! I mean, please, oh please continue this fic, I can't stand to wait more longer than one minute, please ?

GREAT ! Ican't imagine how could you make it flow ever so nicely ! _ Anyway, I want to ask you something. Nagisa is Rei's daughter, right ? Then, where is Nagisa's father ? (Or maybe Nagisa is a clone too, maybe ?)

Damn funny omake and a very good storyline thus far. I love it! Please continue the story!

Interesting...you have me intrigued. Keep it up.

this sounds really promising. wow, shinji forced to repeat the footsteps of his dad. i'll be reading.

Where is Asuka ?

Great story, can't wait to find out how Asuka passed away. Why do I get the feeling there are 2 clones in this story? Nice Omake too. Keep writing, I shall be waiting...

Just what we need, another damn fic slam full of fan characters. And worse, it's one of those never ending fics you write! The Omake at the end was pretty funny though.