great story short but cute

hm

Good story...

cute If I have to say... ^ ^

nb: Kalo bhs inggris, ledakan itu 'BANG' bukan ' DUARR'.. :p

and hanabi kisses konohamaru.And konohamaru like it.

aw this was so sweet! I loved it so fluffy like a cloud great job yay! for Kono/Hanabi

That was a REALLY good story. My friends say I am just like hanabi and tenten

wha, english fanfic. ngeripiu pake inggris ah... -sok inggris-

hm...

luv this fic, i guess a konohamaru-hanabi luv stories are quite rare in FFN... but i lv it. i regret that u dnt use past tense -yup, mulai berlagak makin sok inggris-

anyway... gut! gut! gut! gut! -kembali ke bahasa sehari-hari krn rasa cinta tanah air saiia **hoekk**-

hayooh, lanjutin crushcrushcrush nya dunk!

LOL~ >< its really short~~ i want more!! XD

...yo spelling reminds me of a hillbilly flipperboy named NASCAR trying to write the world 'duuky'.

otherwise, t'was pretty good, mate.

Wow.
Truly great.
Your grammar, good. The 'hanabi' metaphor works great, too.
Great work. Two thumbs up.

Aw! How Cute! :)

Nice one there, puti (hey, this is english fic, so i review with english too!). You know, i've been planning to write one in english, but i haven't got the right mood for it, hehehe...

Very good effort in English. I admire someone who can write in two languages.

Watch for -ing endings. "When they practiced throw(-ING) kunai and shuriken,"

yo, that's awesome, i like this story. hey-hey write another sotry like this please. Gw selalu mencari cerita yang Indonesia tentang Hanabi dan Knohomaru. Kalau bisa yang rate M ya... gw tunggu ceritanya...