Slightly hard to follow, but I do like this. I like how the thoughts are slightly mixed, between L and Near, and all the thoughts racing as the call goes on.

Nice. I like the way you keep Light's train of thought going into "I saw" or "I felt," and then it runs into him thinking about Near. Kind of like proving that he can't trust anything he sees or feels, which ties into justice being an abstract concept. Plus, Light's kind of insane, so he'd definitely think of all this stuff...eventually.

Good work!