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| notwritten 2008-08-09 ch 11,  | abuseVery interesting chapter. Keep smiling. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-08-08 ch 8, | abuseThis is a enjoyable, and pleasant chapter. Thank you for sharing it. Have a wonderful weekend. Keep smiling. :-) Update please. |
| notwritten 2008-08-07 ch 7, | abuseThis chapter is interesting and nice. Thank you for sharing this chapter. Enjoy your day tomorrow. Keep smiling and try to stay cool. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-08-06 ch 6, | abuseVery interesting chapter. Have a cool day tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-08-04 ch 5, | abuseThis was a very interesting and pleasant chapter that you have written. So keep smiling, and have a nice day tomorrow. :-) |
| midnight moonchild 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseI Named her Lily becouse its my favourite Flower and i just think the name sounds cool and its a nice name. |
| Poisonmoon 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseHm, I think it should be mentioned to you that not many people will even bother reading your story since you have centred the text. It's irritating and too much of a task to read when it is not left or justified. And you also need to edit it and use the appropriate punctuation marks and capitals. |
| AndromacheTakaya 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abusehello! i started reading your story, and it's very good so far. i haven't finished it yet, but i will continue it. may i ask a question? why did you name the girl Lily? i'm just curious is all. keep writing! |
| Princess of the Fae 2008-05-26 ch 10, | abuseWill we hear the pitter patter of little Fae feet in the future? |
| notwritten 2008-05-20 ch 9, | abuseI think this chapter is way cool and very okay today. Keep smiling. :-) |
| Jewel-Gurl73 2008-05-20 ch 9, | abusegreat story, I really liked reading it! |
| notwritten 2008-04-30 ch 4, | abuseYou are forgetting punctuation at the end of sentences. When a person is talking, ex- "Hello," said Sarah. Captial it. Not "hello," said Sarah. This chapter is interesting, and good. Have a cool day tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-04-27 ch 3, | abuseInteresting chapter. Keep smiling. :-) |
| notwritten 2008-04-25 ch 2, | abuseThis is a pleasant, and diverting chapter. Have a peaceful weekend. Keep smiling, and let the sun shine down on you. :-) Are there any more chapters headed our way for us to read, please and thank you. |
| notwritten 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseThe story is good. Each time a person speaks they must have their own paragraph. It willmake the story easier to read and enjoy. Keep smiling, and writing. :-) |