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PurplePicklesUnite
2008-05-11
ch 3,
abuseWOW love it.
Mana6
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abusecan I just say, I LOVED the haiku you wrote for Brennan. OMG, it's perfectly beautiful.
Rock on!
BxBforever
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abusewow!
jerseybones
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abuseLove it, love it, love it. I'm sorry I can't come up with a more eloquent review. Love it, love it, love it.
xbonesloverx
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abuseit was great ! please update as soon as you can
xHouseLoverx
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abuse:D Aw.
Monisse
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abuseBeautiful ending!! You gave a nice touch making Brennan feel all those things about "becoming one" in only one kiss, and it means so much more! :)
Great work!
MadeOfStars
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abuseI can see how this chapter would be hard to write. It can be awkward to write awkwardness, but you did it well. I can see her being stiff and not knowing what to say, while he is just subtle and sincere. I like this and though I can certainly see this ending now, it could just as easily be continued... If you can be enticed to write it. :)
diggingupbones
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abuseaw...
i can't wait till you get a change to continue! :D
diggingupbones
2008-05-02
ch 2,
abuseOMIGOSH! you have to continue! please! aw... this is so cute! please continue a.s.a.p! i want to read more so sonn! please?!?! :D :D
xbonesloverx
2008-04-26
ch 2,
abuseaw cute.. update please?!
xHouseLoverx
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuse*watches heart melt* Aw.
PurplePicklesUnite
2008-04-25
ch 2,
abuseToo cute.
PurplePicklesUnite
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abuseAW that's so sweet.
MadeOfStars
2008-04-25
ch 2,
abuseI like how she was so nervous, despite being an "internationally famous author". Her response was perfect, as was her immediate need for distraction. I can't wait to see how he responds to this.
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