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| PurplePicklesUnite 2008-05-11 ch 3, | abuseWOW love it. |
| Mana6 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abusecan I just say, I LOVED the haiku you wrote for Brennan. OMG, it's perfectly beautiful. Rock on! |
| BxBforever 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abusewow! |
| jerseybones 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abuseLove it, love it, love it. I'm sorry I can't come up with a more eloquent review. Love it, love it, love it. |
| xbonesloverx 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abuseit was great ! please update as soon as you can |
| xHouseLoverx 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abuse:D Aw. |
| Monisse 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abuseBeautiful ending!! You gave a nice touch making Brennan feel all those things about "becoming one" in only one kiss, and it means so much more! :) Great work! |
| MadeOfStars 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abuseI can see how this chapter would be hard to write. It can be awkward to write awkwardness, but you did it well. I can see her being stiff and not knowing what to say, while he is just subtle and sincere. I like this and though I can certainly see this ending now, it could just as easily be continued... If you can be enticed to write it. :) |
| diggingupbones 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abuseaw... i can't wait till you get a change to continue! :D |
| diggingupbones 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuseOMIGOSH! you have to continue! please! aw... this is so cute! please continue a.s.a.p! i want to read more so sonn! please?!?! :D :D |
| xbonesloverx 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abuseaw cute.. update please?! |
| xHouseLoverx 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuse*watches heart melt* Aw. |
| PurplePicklesUnite 2008-04-25 ch 2, | abuseToo cute. |
| PurplePicklesUnite 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseAW that's so sweet. |
| MadeOfStars 2008-04-25 ch 2, | abuseI like how she was so nervous, despite being an "internationally famous author". Her response was perfect, as was her immediate need for distraction. I can't wait to see how he responds to this. |