Cute Story, I really enjoyed reading it, Spellings horrible though, and some grammar issues, overall it was really good

All in all, a good story but I still felt that you were a bit too pro-Polly and anti-Guido.

This was one of the most touching endings I've ever read. I was literally in tears by the end of it.

It was such a sad story...but the ending was beautiful!
Good job!

Oh please update again soon!

VVovv, so Guido vvas demoted after all, huh? But at least he seems happy vvith his nevv job. At least it didn't turn into a Guido/Polly (yuck!)

And Al meant Speedy's ashes are ready, right?

Please update soon!

Oh man, you had to end it here?! Oh, no fair!!

VVhat happens, vvhat happens?! I knovv Al said he vvas no longer a Pizza Cat...so, is he just demoted? Is he just gonna be a Guard novv or vvhat?!

Update soon, please.

Oh God, please dopn't let Polly kill herself! No, please, don't let her!!
Come on, don't give this a downer ending, it's really starting to get good, don't have there be 2 deaths, please!

Please update, this and your Deathmatch Cats 3 story again soon.

Great story, but you have a few typos you should look out for. Can't say I'm on Polly's side much though...Guido was right when he said that she had had time to tell Speedy how she felt, and she's been making things difficult for the rest of them. Please update again soon.

I actually enjoy what you are doing here. Of course, like I said earlier, you made a few typos here and there. I don't want to sound like an A-hole, but it makes your work sound a bit amateurish. Don't get me wrong, I like this story.

Oh, boy, Guido's in trouble! VVonder vvhat he's gonna do to get out of this! He'll be lucky if Al doesn't fire him! Hell, he'll be lucky of Vi does throvv him to Prisoner Island or execute him!!

He vvent agaonst the code, more than likely he'll lose his Samurai posituon but good!

This is good, I'm on the edge of my seat!

Sniff...that's so sad!! Heart-breaking!
Oh, but please don't let the cats break up! They need each other now!
Good chapter, really well written.

Finally Guido got vvhat vvas coming to him for a long, long, LONG time. Unfortunatly he might have learned his lesson too late.

Really really povverful stuff!

Right, A nice story, and perfect "What if" scenario.
My only gripe is that you made a bunch of little spelling mistakes, But that is only a small problem. Maybe you could check over your work.