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you've really captured the worry, you get this gnawing feeling in your gut just as James does and its like your worrying right there with him. :\ that despair is just so sad and hard to capture and you've done it brilliantly.

tears again. amazing again.

Another beautiful piece. Love the sort of hope in it, though, with how they are now and they have each other now. Even if they are doomed.

Just one thing - are you aware that in all your Lily/James stories it says that the two characters are James Potter and Lily Luna Potter? You might want to change that.

Just one word: B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L

This was very well-written. Exactly the right amount of pain, and passion.

could you be any more amazing or morbid?

...that was a compliment, by the by.

very dark and deep. it suits you though. i think you're a very powerful, in depth writer that likes to answer the unthinkable, unavoidable, and very ignored questions.
i love it. it's brilliant and heart pulling and full of... something that i can feel to my very toes.
wonderful.

i don't think it was over-done.
dramatic. definitely. but it works in this situation.
i think really captured the panic and tragedy of this time period.
this story was really well written and did a great job of envoking emotion.
i can't wait to read the rest of your stories!

love,

T.C.

again, hauntingly beautiful. i loved it.

Too awesome and too depresive. Wonderful, so deep and romantic.
Amazing grammar, not even a mistake. I would like to translate it if you let me, of course with all the credits, please, let me know if you agree. Awesome storie. Oh, and I write in spanish. I'll wait for your answer.

Wow, that was amazing! Very descriptive and thought-provoking. Great way to write about the inevitablity of death.
"Maybe they’ll die apart, have to live without the other for a numb stretch of time, the ticking of the clock far worse to hearing ears than the ominous, echoing footsteps of death."
That was some great imagery! Can I steal your writing ability for an undetermined amount of time? PLEASE? I love the second to last sentence! All right, at the risk of being repetative, I'll write it again: Amazing!

Dare I say it? NO GRAMMAR ERRORS! Hurrah! It's been too long since I've said that! I should put a special mention of you in my profile for it and give you a gold star because it's so scarce to see correct grammar nowadays. Sad, I know.

This is a really beautiful little look into the lives of Lily and James. It's very well written as well, it shows talent that is rare, especially on sites like this. You should be very proud, it's very moving.

Beautiful. Made me feel empty.


And that's something.

-Melts-

Utterly and completely and wholly and fantastically gorgeous. Beyond words kind of gorgeous, I mean.

You have an amazing, raw sort of a talent - like, it feels totally spur-of-the-moment with the way you get down all those emotions, but at the same time, it feels polished and pretty and perfect. It's envy-inspiring; I bet you people around the world hate you for writing so beautifully. I know I do...sometimes. xD

But anyway, I love it. I really do. Keep writing these as they come to you, because from what I see Mina, you've definitely got things to say & I'd like to hear them.

Zay

aw its sad but cute