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| Kitala 2008-07-25 ch 10,  | abuseInteresting. I wonder what old Dracciekins will have to say to Doris. |
| assuit 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseWhat a wonderful cliff hanger. I love it. |
| lucillaq 2008-07-21 ch 10, anon. | abuseHmm...interesting. I hope Dracula Senior isn't going to try and do anything 'weird' with Doris - that would be creepy. |
| assuit 2008-07-15 ch 9, | abuseClap clap clap. Loved the chapter and making D's dad even better looking, wow! And more powerful. Good on Doris for pointing out Dante was a blessing. |
| Gemini14 2008-07-15 ch 9, anon. | abuseVery creepy chapter! I just wonder what Dracula will try to do, in the future! And yes, the manga does help to inspire, doesn't it? |
| shallowswan 2008-07-12 ch 8, | abusesorry it took me a few days to read this...excellent, gripping work as usual! I especally love that your keeping in touch with the first book...and bringing in Doctor Tsrugi (I can't spell.:P) as well. Yay for Dracula too! :D |
| Kitala 2008-07-09 ch 8, | abuseVery interesting. Keep them coming! |
| lucillaq 2008-07-09 ch 8, anon. | abuseCool. |
| assuit 2008-07-08 ch 8, | abuseUg. That is so awesome! "My father". Wow this story is really developing nicely. |
| Gemini14 2008-07-08 ch 8, anon. | abuseAnd the suspence builds! I wonder what Doris' reaction will be to this twist? Awesome chapter, as always (and sorry for not having reviewed the two before this one!) |
| Sango The Hoe 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThanks for all of the wonderful comments! One, to answer your question, assuit, D did sleep with Doris again. I just hinted it. "Along with the night frogs' croaks, the singing of the crickets, and the howl of demons, were the sounds of rippling bed sheets. How did they find themselves at it again?" I think that's what I put. -- One more thing-- I am taking pretty much ALL of the advice you have been giving me. This story is going to be a long, long, LONG one unless I write it in two parts, so I've decided to. Just so you know, once this one ends, you guys should check my profile for the second one! Thanks guys! |
| assuit 2008-07-04 ch 7, | abuseThis is my favourite D story on FF so far. I have a question, did D sleep with Doris again after the baby? It wasn't written in but mentioned by the hand. |
| Kitala 2008-07-04 ch 7, | abuseVery interesting! I can't wait to see what happens! |
| Eno Kureno. Agent Chicken H... 2008-07-03 ch 5, | abuseD3, Dolores II, Daemon, Desmon, Debbie, and the 2 Dantes. D's got quite a handful now. Better send him to some of those classes, Baby Care and such :D When I read that D tied his horse up, all I could think was "Bee Beep" lol. You've taken over my mind... AGAIN. With Love, The Greatest Person in the World Anonymous |
| shallowswan 2008-07-01 ch 6, | abusewow...just wow! another amazing chapter! I really really belive the heat and emotions between D and Doris, he can deny it all he wants but it's there! Hehehehe...you outta right about him breaking down and giving into that passion once again, he clearly feels something for her. I am jelous...you write so much faster than me! :P |