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| Kouzumi93 2008-06-03 ch 7,  | abuseAlright, I'm going to take another completely random guess that is most likely going to be wrong, since I'm actually just bored and feel like making random guesses. When Aizen, Tousen and Ichimaru betray the soul society and leave, Haseo is going to go with them, following Tousen as part of his justice. Like I said, I'm just randomly guessing again, because if I didn't guess again, I wouldn't know what else to say in here. Anyway, Good job, as always, and I hope to see more soon. ~Kouzumi93~ PS My new story is up now. |
| Twilidramon 2008-06-03 ch 7, | abuseOh snap! Friend vs Friend!! Loaño: It's like the Civil War. That was Brother vs Brother, Lo. Loaño: ...So? ...Whatever. Awsome chapter, man! |
| DtecnoKira 2008-06-02 ch 7, | abuseNo! What a shocking twist. Update soon. Go Loana! |
| DtecnoKira 2008-06-02 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter. (Don't quote me on this, but I heard that Nejibana means "Screw Flower" I know neji can mean Screw... right, Mr. Hyuuga? Anyway, not sure if that's true or not. Great chappie! |
| Twilidramon 2008-06-02 ch 6, | abuseThat was big and cool and funny! Loaño: Still wanna know! Just freaking PICK ONE!! |
| Kouzumi93 2008-06-02 ch 6, | abuseI see you've gotten better with your spelling. Good for you! Anyway, my guess as to what is happening at the end is that Haseo is the one who has stopped them, and then in the next chapter, you'll probably have the two of them fight each other while the rest of the group moves on. Or something of the sort. Like I said, it's just a random guess. ~Kouzumi93~ PS By the way, I have started a new story which should be posted by the end of tonight. If you're really bored and/or need a good laugh, maybe you could check it out. Thanks! |
| Twilidramon 2008-05-15 ch 5, | abuseHey, I'm back!! Still doing good! |
| DtecnoKira 2008-05-11 ch 5, | abuseAwesome chapter, update soon. I like your version of the events! By the way, have you read the new chapter of Spidey's Legend of the Icy Hot Ninja, its really good! |
| Kouzumi93 2008-05-11 ch 5, | abuseAs always, this was awesome. I see that you took the time to make sure that the spelling was good, so that makes me happy. Keep up the great work! ~Kouzumi93~ |
| BoogiepopShippuden 2008-04-30 ch 4, | abuseCool! Update soon please! |
| BoogiepopShippuden 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseAwesome chapter! |
| BoogiepopShippuden 2008-04-30 ch 2, | abuseUryu seems to trust Haseo pretty quickly, but this was a great chapter! Wow, this Haseo really IS different from the other one, can't wait to read more! |
| BoogiepopShippuden 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseOMG the prophecy rocks! Thanks for the reviews! I'll be sure to reading finish this later. (Its usually too noisy to read during the day.) |
| Kouzumi93 2008-04-27 ch 4, | abuseSorry that I didn't review the last chapter. I started to read it but then I had to get off the computer for something, and I never got around to finishing it, so I'm glad that you updated today. Anyway, the chapters were good, but just a little hint of advice: Try to read over the chapter before you post it. There were quite a number of words that were missing a letter, and you, at one point, spelled Haseo's name wrong. I'm not trying to criticise you on anything, because I absolutely love the story, I'm just giving you some friendly advise that you should take into consideration. Update soon, please! ~Kouzumi93~ |
| Twilidramon 2008-04-27 ch 4, | abuseNeat...a human grappling hook! That sounds fun!! |