Wow thats so cool, 4 some reason the whole rocket thing reminds me of willy wonka, i dunno y lol

Even though you already sent this to me, and I read it, I'm gonna review anyway xP Good chapter! I liked it. It was a good plot, and wow, Kenny must be a deep sleeper xD

very cool new characters! i can't wait to see what the story is about!

Good chapter. I like the idea and the policeman could have come right out of an episode.
It was a little confusing - like how did Ricki know Kenny lived over in the bad part of town? But other than that, it was pretty good.
Oh, and no problem :D I'm glad you're cool with the advice - some authors can get a little hostile :P If you'd like me to continue reading over the chapters, that's totally cool with me.
Looking forward to more!

I like how you didn't use Sirius's POV and evolved it so much from what i said. i wanted the officer to say "You Bastards... hey kid nice gun.." but meh. It's so cool and i can't wait till they all get settled in.

YAY! You updated! It felt like FOREVER since you updated. But, thats beside the point. It was a great chapter! And I didn't just like it for my character, I liked it for the story ^-^ GO SID FOR DOING WHATS RIGHT!
And, I just wanted to thank you for helping me work the DocX thingy. You really..Helped me :)

I like it, i mean not just because its my character but because its pretty good.

"At least I can fit in a car whereas your ** of a mom has to strap you to the roof." Nothing on fanfic has made me laugh like that for quite a while. Please update :)

I like it a lot :) and I love Loraine! I didn't give you too much info to work with, but you seem to have made her into a pretty well-rounded character. Nice. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of her (and the others, of course...)
Also, you've done a pretty good job with the new-kids-meet-the-boys scene. This scene usually ends up being a little cliche, but I think you managed to make it original - good job.
There are a fair amount of spelling and grammar issues, but other than that this looks like it's shaping up to be a pretty good story. If you'd like, I would be more than happy to look over the chapters and help fix some of the little mistakes - but that's only if you want, of course. It's your story.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more.

O.O...O.O...AH!(GLOMPS YOU) OMFG! I THINK I LOVE YOU =D CONTINUE! Er..Sorry for the capital letters '^^ But, thankies ^_^